Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors such as 'send me so much time' (should be 'saves me a lot of time') and 'provides so much features' (should be 'provides many features'). Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why, and finish with specific features.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is an automatic robotic vacuum cleaner because it saves me a lot of time. It not only sweeps but also mops the floors, which means I don't have to clean manually. This convenience allows me to focus on other tasks.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains some hesitations and unclear phrases like 'know looking after their children' and 'SP spare time' which affect naturalness. Try to organise your ideas logically and use linking words such as 'because' and 'so' to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'you know'.

Exemplo: Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are very important because many people, especially in cities, have busy lives. They need to save time on chores so they can spend their free time on more meaningful activities, like looking after their children or relaxing.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid informal contractions like ''cause' and filler phrases like 'if you know'. Also, use plural form 'instructions' and try to link your ideas clearly. For example, start with a direct answer, then explain why you don't read all instructions.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine, but I don't read all of them because they are often very long, sometimes over 20 pages, and I don't have enough time to go through everything.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I would say it's important' twice. Also, use plural 'instructions' and try to link your ideas smoothly. For example, mention the importance of reading caution sections specifically, then briefly comment on other parts.

Exemplo: Yes, I think it's important to read the instructions, especially the caution sections, because they warn you about potential dangers or damage. However, some other parts might be less critical to read in detail.

× And the reason I love that is because it just send me so much time that I don't really need to manually sweep my floors.

✓ And the reason I love that is because it just saves me so much time so that I don't really need to manually sweep my floors.

The verb 'send' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'save' to express time being conserved. Also, 'send' should be in the third person singular form 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× And yeah, it just provides so much features where it is providing features in sweeping and also in mopping it.

✓ And yeah, it just provides so many features, including sweeping and mopping.

The phrase 'provides so much features' is incorrect because 'features' is countable and requires 'many' instead of 'much'. The phrase 'where it is providing features in sweeping and also in mopping it' is awkward and ungrammatical; it is better to say 'including sweeping and mopping'. Also, 'mopping it' is incorrect; 'mopping' alone suffices.

× Yes, I do feel it's important because nowadays, especially people living in the city, everyone is just very busy with know looking after their children and maybe, uh, working and also, you know, when they have SP spare time, it will be better to use it for more meaningful cards.

✓ Yes, I do feel it's important because nowadays, especially people living in the city, everyone is just very busy with looking after their children and maybe, uh, working and also, you know, when they have spare time, it will be better to use it for more meaningful tasks.

The phrase 'busy with know looking after' is incorrect; 'know' should be removed. 'SP spare time' seems to be a typo and should be 'spare time'. Also, 'cards' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'tasks'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I do read the instruction, but I would say I don't really read all of them and 'cause I think if you know, most of the time it will be more than 20 pages long and I don't really have the time for that.

✓ Yes, I do read the instructions, but I would say I don't really read all of them because I think, you know, most of the time they are more than 20 pages long and I don't really have the time for that.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple pages or steps. Also, 'it will be more than 20 pages' should be 'they are more than 20 pages' to agree with the plural noun 'instructions'. The conjunction 'and' before 'cause' is better replaced with 'because' for clarity.

× Yes, I do think it's important to read the instruction, especially the caution part where most of the time it is where it warns you against doing something that might damage or injure yourself.

✓ Yes, I do think it's important to read the instructions, especially the caution part where most of the time it warns you against doing something that might damage or injure yourself.

Again, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple guidelines. The phrase 'where most of the time it is where it warns' is redundant; it is better to say 'where most of the time it warns'. This improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.