Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, câu "It's really tired" không đúng ngữ pháp và gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn thích máy giặt.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves a lot of time and effort. For example, instead of washing clothes by hand, I can simply load them into the machine and it cleans them thoroughly. This is especially helpful when I have a lot of laundry to do.

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời còn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp như "machine works too" không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và mở rộng câu trả lời với các lý do cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort. Moreover, these machines often clean more thoroughly than manual methods, which helps keep the home cleaner and more hygienic.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp như "injections" thay vì "instructions", và câu "I can just guessing it" không đúng ngữ pháp. Bạn nên chú ý phát âm chính xác và sử dụng thì đúng. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn với các liên từ để kết nối ý.

Exemplo: I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because I prefer to figure it out by trying the buttons. However, if I can't make it work, I will read the manual to understand how to use it properly.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng như "more devices have those burdens are designed" gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Đồng thời, bạn nên đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

Exemplo: In my opinion, reading instructions is not always necessary because many devices are designed to be user-friendly. For example, the main functions are usually obvious, so people can learn how to use them by exploring.

× It's really tired.

✓ It's really tiring.

The adjective 'tired' describes a feeling experienced by people, not machines. The correct adjective to describe something that causes tiredness is 'tiring'. Therefore, 'It's really tiring' is appropriate here.

× I think that this kind of appliances are very essential, not only because they save your time doing it manually, but they can do it better because machine works too.

✓ I think that this kind of appliance is very essential, not only because it saves your time doing it manually, but it can do it better because machines work too.

The phrase 'this kind of' should be followed by a singular noun ('appliance') and singular verb ('is'). Also, 'machine works too' should be pluralized to 'machines work too' to agree with the plural subject.

× I actually never read injections before using something because I think that I can just guessing it by clicking every button.

✓ I actually never read instructions before using something because I think that I can just guess it by clicking every button.

The word 'injections' is incorrect; the intended word is 'instructions'. Also, 'guessing' should be 'guess' to match the modal verb 'can' which is followed by the base form of the verb.

× But if it's still not working I might really interested because I am so lazy to read all that.

✓ But if it's still not working I might be really interested because I am so lazy to read all that.

The phrase 'might really interested' is incorrect; it should be 'might be really interested' because 'might' is a modal verb followed by the base form of the verb 'be'.

× As for me, I think reading those instructions are not always necessary because more devices have those burdens are designed to be easy to use.

✓ As for me, I think reading those instructions is not always necessary because most devices that have those burdens are designed to be easy to use.

The subject 'reading those instructions' is singular and requires the singular verb 'is'. Also, 'more devices have those burdens are designed' is ungrammatical; it should be 'most devices that have those burdens are designed'.

× Usually the biggest one or the most obvious one is the main function, so we could just explore.

✓ Usually the biggest one or the most obvious one is the main function, so we can just explore.

The modal verb 'could' suggests possibility or past ability, but here the present ability or suggestion is intended, so 'can' is more appropriate.