Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung phù hợp, nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về từ vựng và ngữ pháp như 'divide' thay vì 'device' và 'spot' thay vì 'device' hoặc 'tool'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ chính xác và tránh lỗi chính tả để câu trả lời trở nên chuyên nghiệp hơn.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is definitely my phone. As a teenager, I spend a lot of time on it, not only surfing the Internet and watching movies, but also staying connected with my friends through social media and messaging apps. It's an essential device for me because I can use it for entertainment and keeping in touch with people who live far away.

Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'cleans the hair' không phù hợp, nên dùng 'cleaning the floor' hoặc 'vacuuming'. Ngoài ra, câu cuối hơi lủng củng, bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng và chính xác hơn.

Exemplo: Of course, washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because they have revolutionized household chores. For example, these appliances have made washing clothes and cleaning the floor much easier and faster, which is efficient and makes daily cleaning less tiring.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, có cấu trúc rõ ràng và nội dung cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'read' nhiều lần.

Exemplo: Well, I don't usually read the instructions carefully because the manual is often very long and detailed. However, I do read them when I use a new machine or want to learn about a special function. For instance, when I first bought a new coffee maker, I read the instructions to understand how to operate it.

Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp như 'prevent mistake' nên là 'prevent mistakes' và 'spent about an hour to learning' nên là 'spent about an hour learning'. Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời chính xác hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I think it's very important to read instructions carefully because it can save you a lot of time and prevent mistakes. For example, when I bought my first game controller, I spent about an hour learning how to use it just because I tore away the instruction paper, and I regret it.

× It's an essential divide for me because I can use this spot for entertainment and keeping in touch with people who live far away.

✓ It's an essential device for me because I can use this spot for entertainment and keep in touch with people who live far away.

The word 'divide' is incorrect and should be 'device' to refer to a machine. Also, 'keeping' should be parallel with 'use' and changed to 'keep' to maintain parallel structure in the sentence.

× For example, this appliance has made cleaning clothes and cleans the hair much more easier and faster, which is efficiently and making daily cleaning less tiring.

✓ For example, this appliance has made cleaning clothes and cleaning the hair much easier and faster, which is efficient and makes daily cleaning less tiring.

The phrase 'cleans the hair' should be 'cleaning the hair' to parallel 'cleaning clothes'. 'Much more easier' is incorrect; 'much easier' is correct because 'easier' already implies comparison. 'Which is efficiently' should be 'which is efficient' to use the correct adjective. 'Making' should be 'makes' to agree with the subject.

× I don't usually read the instructions casually because the manual is often very long and detailed.

✓ I don't usually read the instructions carefully because the manual is often very long and detailed.

The adverb 'casually' is not appropriate here; 'carefully' fits better to express the manner of reading instructions.

× For example, when I first bought a new coffee maker, I read instructions to understand how to operate it.

✓ For example, when I first bought a new coffee maker, I read the instructions to understand how to operate it.

The noun 'instructions' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' because it refers to specific instructions for the coffee maker.

× Yes, I think it's very important to read an instruction carefully because it can save you a lot of time and prevent mistake.

✓ Yes, I think it's very important to read instructions carefully because it can save you a lot of time and prevent mistakes.

'An instruction' is incorrect; 'instructions' is usually plural and uncountable in this context. 'Prevent mistake' should be 'prevent mistakes' to agree in number.

× For example, when I bought my first game control, I spent about an hour to learning how to use it just because I tore away the instruction paper and I regret about it.

✓ For example, when I bought my first game controller, I spent about an hour learning how to use it just because I tore away the instruction paper and I regret it.

'Game control' should be 'game controller' as the correct noun. 'Spent about an hour to learning' should be 'spent about an hour learning' because 'spend' is followed by verb + -ing. 'Regret about it' should be 'regret it' because 'regret' does not require 'about' in this context.