Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some redundancy and repetition, such as "time efficient, efficient" and "really saves our time." Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use more varied vocabulary. Also, add linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, you can say "because it saves us a lot of time and effort."

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves us a lot of time and effort. Moreover, it helps keep our clothes clean and fresh without much manual work.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, with many hesitations and unfinished sentences. To improve, try to organize your thoughts before speaking and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid filler words like "umm." For example, you can say "Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are important because they make household chores easier and save time."

Exemplo: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. They are common in most homes because they help people clean efficiently and save a lot of time.

Sugestão: Your answer shows your point but has grammatical errors and is incomplete. Try to use correct verb forms and complete your sentences. Also, use linking words to explain your reasons clearly. For example, "Yes, I always read the instructions because I want to avoid mistakes and use the machine safely."

Exemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I want to avoid mistakes and ensure I use it correctly and safely.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains errors such as "vital treaty instructions" and "searching machine maybe." To improve, use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, explain why reading instructions is important with clear reasons. For example, "Yes, reading instructions is important because it helps us save time and use machines more effectively."

Exemplo: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because it helps us save time and use the machines properly without causing damage.

× It is time efficient, efficient and really saves our time.

✓ It is time-efficient, effective, and really saves our time.

The phrase 'time efficient' should be hyphenated as 'time-efficient' because it is a compound adjective describing the machine. Also, repeating 'efficient' is redundant; 'effective' is a better adjective here to avoid repetition and improve clarity.

× I think yes, because umm, washing machines and sweeping machines, umm, are vital and they are likely in everyone's home and they are very convenient and. Make people.

✓ I think yes, because washing machines and sweeping machines are vital, commonly found in everyone's home, and very convenient for people.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete, especially the phrase 'and. Make people.' which is not a complete thought. The correction combines ideas into a coherent sentence, removing filler words and fixing sentence fragments.

× Yes, I always do because I'm I am really scared of doing something wrong and I'm that type of person who always read the instruction I think to avoid mistakes and.

✓ Yes, I always do because I am really scared of doing something wrong, and I am the type of person who always reads the instructions to avoid mistakes.

The sentence has pronoun and verb agreement issues: 'I'm I am' is redundant, and 'who always read' should be 'who always reads' to agree with singular 'type of person.' Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple steps.

× I think it is a vital treaty instructions to to save our time and make it easier to use the searching machine maybe.

✓ I think it is vital to read the instructions to save our time and make it easier to use the washing machine.

The phrase 'vital treaty instructions' is incorrect; likely intended 'vital to read the instructions.' Also, 'searching machine' is incorrect; the correct term is 'washing machine.' The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.