Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar mistakes. For example, instead of saying 'quickly and fastly', just say 'quickly'. Also, clarify your points with specific examples and avoid vague phrases like 'to management at time'.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me wash clothes quickly and efficiently. For example, it saves me a lot of time compared to washing by hand, allowing me to focus on other tasks.

Sugestão: Focus on clarity and correct vocabulary. Use proper linking words and avoid confusing terms like 'management at time'. Also, distinguish between 'sweeping' and 'sewing' machines if relevant. Provide clear reasons why these machines are important.

Exemplo: Even though I haven't used a washing machine or a vacuum cleaner much, I believe they are very important at home. They help us clean clothes and floors more efficiently, saving time and effort.

Sugestão: Avoid irrelevant phrases like 'I believe God' which confuse the meaning. Use correct terms such as 'instructions' instead of 'construction'. Use linking words properly and explain clearly why reading instructions is important.

Exemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they provide important information on how to operate it safely and effectively. For example, instructions explain the steps to start the machine and any precautions to take.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Clarify your points with specific reasons why reading instructions is important.

Exemplo: Yes, I think reading instructions is very important because they provide detailed information about the machine and explain how to use it properly. This helps prevent mistakes and ensures safety.

× In my opinion, the washing machine is my favorite machine at home because it can help me to wash clothes quickly and fastly.

✓ In my opinion, the washing machine is my favorite machine at home because it can help me wash clothes quickly and fast.

The adverb 'fastly' is incorrect; the correct adverb form is 'fast'. Also, 'help me to wash' can be simplified to 'help me wash'. Using correct adverbs improves sentence clarity and correctness.

× Moreover, it can help me to save a time also to management at time, for example.

✓ Moreover, it can help me save time and manage it better, for example.

The phrase 'a time' is incorrect; 'time' is an uncountable noun and does not need an article here. Also, 'to management at time' is incorrect; it should be 'manage time'. Correct quantifier and verb usage is necessary for clarity.

× Although I didn't use washing machine and sewing machine, it's also really important for our house.

✓ Although I don't use the washing machine and the sewing machine, they are also really important for our house.

The sentence lacks definite articles before 'washing machine' and 'sewing machine'. Also, 'it's' (it is) is incorrect when referring to two machines; 'they are' should be used. Proper pronoun and article use is essential for grammatical agreement.

× It can help us to washing clothes instead of a simple way to wash a cloth.

✓ It can help us wash clothes instead of using a simple way to wash clothes.

The phrase 'help us to washing' is incorrect; after 'help', the base verb without 'to' or the infinitive with 'to' is used, but not the gerund. Also, 'a cloth' should be 'clothes' to refer to garments generally. Correct preposition and verb form usage is important.

× Moreover, it can management at time.

✓ Moreover, it can help manage time.

'Management' is a noun; the correct verb form is 'manage'. Also, 'at time' is incorrect; it should be 'time' without a preposition. Correct verb form and preposition usage are necessary.

× It also can save a time.

✓ It can also save time.

'A time' is incorrect; 'time' is uncountable and does not need an article. Also, adverb placement is improved by placing 'also' after the modal verb. Correct article and adverb placement improve sentence correctness.

× Actually, yes, I believe God.

✓ Actually, yes, I believe so.

The phrase 'I believe God' is incorrect in this context; likely the student meant 'I believe so' to affirm the previous question. Correct pronoun and phrase usage is important for clarity.

× It is really important to read the instruction before we use the machine.

✓ It is really important to read the instructions before we use the machine.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' when referring to the manual or guidelines. Correct article and noun number usage is necessary.

× Moreover, construction used to teach us more information about the machine.

✓ Moreover, instructions are used to teach us more information about the machine.

'Construction' is incorrect; the correct word is 'instructions'. Also, passive voice with 'are used' is appropriate here. Correct word choice and voice improve clarity.

× Furthermore, instruction can help us to how the machines work and how to start.

✓ Furthermore, instructions can help us understand how the machines work and how to start them.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. Also, 'help us to how' is incorrect; it should be 'help us understand how'. Adding 'them' clarifies the object. Correct pronoun and verb usage is essential.

× Although some people don't read the instruction before they use the machine, it's really important to read it and the instruction can help can give us more information about the machine or the more they can give us the way to how they can start.

✓ Although some people don't read the instructions before they use the machine, it's really important to read them because the instructions can give us more information about the machine and how to start it.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. Pronouns 'it' and 'them' must agree with plural 'instructions'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar. Proper article, pronoun, and sentence structure usage is necessary.