Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid general statements like 'machines are used globally' which do not directly answer the question. Also, use correct tense and grammar, for example, 'it has made our life easier' instead of 'had made our life easy'. Try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences and include linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps clean dirty clothes quickly. It has made our daily chores much easier and saves a lot of time. Moreover, it contributes to a more sustainable lifestyle by using water efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer has some unclear phrases like 'sequel machines' and 'give preference to important works while instead of their washing clothes' which affect clarity. Make sure to use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion, and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because they help us keep our homes clean and hygienic. For instance, after a busy day, these machines save time by doing cleaning tasks quickly, allowing us to focus on other important activities.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using plural forms correctly ('instructions' instead of 'instruction') and by adding linking words for better flow. Also, avoid repeating ideas and try to be more concise and natural in your response.

Exemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me operate it efficiently. This way, I can save time and concentrate on other important tasks without any problems.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but repeating 'as I mentioned' is unnecessary in a speaking test. Instead, focus on giving a clear and concise answer with supporting details. Also, use plural 'instructions' and try to vary your vocabulary to avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, reading the instructions is very important because it helps us use machines correctly and efficiently, which saves time and prevents mistakes.

× In modern world machines are used globally.

✓ In the modern world, machines are used globally.

The phrase 'In modern world' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'modern world'. This is an article error (ID 22) but also relates to singular/plural usage as 'world' is singular and needs an article. Adding 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× Favorite machine in my home is washing machine because it helps to clean dirty clothes and it had made our life easy and sustainable.

✓ My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps to clean dirty clothes and it has made our lives easy and sustainable.

The sentence misses possessive pronouns and articles: 'Favorite machine in my home' should be 'My favorite machine at home'. 'Washing machine' needs the definite article 'the'. 'It had made our life' should be 'it has made our lives' because 'life' is plural in this context and present perfect tense is appropriate here.

× Yes, washing machine and sequel machines are important as they can be used to clean and maintain a proper hygiene.

✓ Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are important as they can be used to clean and maintain proper hygiene.

The phrase 'washing machine and sequel machines' has singular/plural inconsistency and a wrong word 'sequel' instead of 'sweeping'. Both machines should be plural as they refer to types of machines generally. Also, 'a proper hygiene' is incorrect; 'hygiene' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.

× For example, after a long day, these machines can be used to maintain our work and give preference to important works while instead of their washing clothes.

✓ For example, after a long day, these machines can be used to maintain our work and give preference to important tasks instead of washing clothes.

The phrase 'while instead of their washing clothes' is incorrect. 'While' is unnecessary and 'their' is wrongly used. Also, 'important works' should be 'important tasks' as 'work' is uncountable. The corrected sentence removes unnecessary words and uses correct prepositions.

× Yes, reading instruction before using machine is my first preference because it allows us to operate a machine very efficiently.

✓ Yes, reading instructions before using a machine is my first preference because it allows us to operate a machine very efficiently.

'Reading instruction' should be plural 'reading instructions' because instructions are usually multiple. Also, 'using machine' needs an article 'a' before 'machine'.

× Also, machines can save a lot of time and allows us to focus on important tasks.

✓ Also, machines can save a lot of time and allow us to focus on important tasks.

The subject 'machines' is plural, so the verb should be 'allow' not 'allows' to agree in number (subject-verb agreement).

× As I mentioned in my previous question, reading instruction is most important because it saves a lot of time and it allows us to operate machines smoothly and efficiently.

✓ As I mentioned in my previous answer, reading instructions is most important because it saves a lot of time and allows us to operate machines smoothly and efficiently.

'Reading instruction' should be plural 'reading instructions'. Also, 'previous question' is better as 'previous answer' since the speaker is referring to their own previous response. The second 'it' before 'allows' is unnecessary and can be omitted for better flow.