Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，且句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子，避免语法错误，并且增加连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. Without it, I would have to wash all my clothes by hand, which is very tiring and time-consuming.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I agree that washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. Without them, I would feel tired and frustrated because I would have to do all the housework and wash many things by hand.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达重复，句子不完整。建议使用连贯的句子结构，避免重复，并注意语法正确性。

Exemplo: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because some machines have new technology that I am not familiar with. Reading the instructions helps me use the machine correctly and avoid damaging it.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的语法结构，简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because some machines use new technology and methods. By reading the instructions, we can use the machines correctly and safely.

× My favorite machine in my home is washing machine, because it's really useful.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine, because it's really useful.

这里缺少冠词“the”，因为“washing machine”是特指家里的洗衣机，应该用定冠词。

× If I haven't a washing machine, I should wash a lot of clothes by myself.

✓ If I didn't have a washing machine, I would have to wash a lot of clothes by myself.

情态动词用法错误，条件句中应使用过去式“didn't have”，主句用“would have to”表示假设情况。

× That is very terrible and.

✓ That would be very terrible.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，且“terrible”前应加情态动词表达假设。

× Yes, I really agreed with those machines are very important because if without this machine I will feel very tired and irritable because I should do a lot of housework and wash a lot of things close by my hand.

✓ Yes, I really agree that those machines are very important because without these machines I would feel very tired and irritable since I have to do a lot of housework and wash many things by hand.

“agreed”时态错误，应为现在时“agree”；“if without”结构错误，应改为“without”；“should”用法不当，表示义务时用“have to”；“close by my hand”表达错误，应为“by hand”。

× Yes, I usually read instructions before I use a machine.

✓ Yes, I usually read the instructions before I use a machine.

“instructions”前缺少定冠词“the”，因为指特定的说明书。

× Because some machine is a new technology and a new things for me, I must to read, I must read the instructions.

✓ Because some machines are new technology and new things for me, I must read the instructions.

“some machine”应为复数“some machines”；“a new things”中“things”是复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”；“must to read”错误，情态动词“must”后直接接动词原形。

× So make sure I can use the machine in a right way and don't make the machine.

✓ So I make sure I can use the machine in the right way and not damage the machine.

“a right way”应为“the right way”；“don't make the machine”表达不清，应改为“not damage the machine”。

× Yes, I think that's important because some machine is with new technology and new method to use.

✓ Yes, I think that's important because some machines have new technology and new methods to use.

“some machine”应为复数“some machines”；“is with”表达错误，应为“have”；“new method”应为复数“new methods”。

× We should to read in structure instruction before we use it and make sure we can use them in a right way and make me use the machine safety.

✓ We should read the instruction before we use it and make sure we can use it in the right way and use the machine safely.

“should to read”错误，情态动词“should”后不加“to”；“in structure instruction”应为“the instruction”；“make me use the machine safety”表达错误，应为“use the machine safely”。