Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: حاول تبقى إجابتك أوضح ومنظمة أكتر، وركز على استخدام جمل كاملة وواضحة. استخدم كلمات مناسبة لوصف الماكينة ووضح ليه بتحبها بشكل محدد، وقلل التكرار.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is my coffee machine because it makes both hot and cold coffee. It helps me feel happy and comfortable while I work and study.

Sugestão: ركز على ترتيب أفكارك واستخدم كلمات ربط لتوضيح العلاقة بين الأفكار. تأكد من استخدام الكلمات الصحيحة (مثل 'sweeping machine' بدل 'sewing machine' إذا كنت تقصد مكانس كهربائية). قلل التكرار ووضح الفكرة بشكل محدد.

Exemplo: Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and make our lives easier. For example, washing machines clean all types of clothes efficiently.

Sugestão: حاول تكون جملك أوضح وتجنب التكرار. استخدم كلمات مناسبة للتعبير عن الفائدة من قراءة التعليمات، ووضح المخاطر بشكل دقيق.

Exemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions because they help me use the machine safely and avoid any accidents or injuries.

Sugestão: حاول تبني جمل أكثر دقة وتنظيم، واستخدم مفردات مناسبة لوصف المخاطر. قلل من الأخطاء النحوية ووضح السبب بشكل أفضل.

Exemplo: Yes, it is very important to read instructions before using any device because ignoring them can cause problems or injuries, like hurting your arm.

× I have a coffee machine that can be more tasty and have many choice like cold coffee and hot coffee.

✓ I have a coffee machine that can make tastier coffee and has many choices like cold coffee and hot coffee.

The phrase 'more tasty' is incorrect; the comparative form of 'tasty' is 'tastier'. Also, 'have many choice' should be 'has many choices' because 'choice' is countable and needs to be plural here, and the subject is singular, so 'has' is correct.

× This can be can make me feel happy and comfortable on my job and study a lot of.

✓ This can make me feel happy and comfortable while I work and study a lot.

The sentence structure is awkward and contains redundancy ('can be can make'). Also, 'on my job' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'while I work'. 'Study a lot of' is incomplete; it should be 'study a lot'.

× Yes, I think so, because washing machine and sewing machine can help us and save our time that also can make our life more easier than before.

✓ Yes, I think so, because washing machines and sewing machines can help us and save our time, which also can make our lives easier than before.

The nouns 'washing machine' and 'sewing machine' should be plural to refer generally. 'Life' should be plural 'lives' when referring to multiple people. 'More easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone suffices.

× Washing machine can wash all the clothes black and white.

✓ Washing machines can wash all clothes, both black and white.

'Washing machine' should be plural 'washing machines' to generalize. 'All the clothes black and white' is awkward; better to say 'all clothes, both black and white'.

× This can help can be helpful, helpful.

✓ This can be helpful.

The sentence contains redundancy and incorrect repetition. Simplifying to 'This can be helpful' is correct.

× Yes, I read the instruction because that can be helpful and can protect us from the from the range that and that can lead to a harmful.

✓ Yes, I read the instructions because they can be helpful and can protect us from danger that can lead to harm.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. The phrase 'from the from the range that and that can lead to a harmful' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'from danger that can lead to harm'.

× Yes, it is very important to read instruction before using any device because it is a little too many problem and risk such as injury at your arm.

✓ Yes, it is very important to read instructions before using any device because there are many problems and risks, such as injury to your arm.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'A little too many problem' is incorrect; 'many problems' is correct. 'Injury at your arm' should be 'injury to your arm'.