Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by making it more natural and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors, and try to use a wider range of vocabulary.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it makes cleaning clothes much easier and faster. Moreover, it saves a lot of time and effort compared to washing by hand, which is especially helpful when I have many clothes to wash.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort. Since people are often busy with work or studies, these machines help them complete household chores quickly and efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repetition. Also, try to use varied vocabulary to express your points.

Exemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I want to make sure I use it correctly and safely. This helps me avoid any mistakes or damage.

Sugestão: Your answer shows agreement but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to express your ideas in a structured way with clear reasons and linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases and grammatical errors.

Exemplo: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using any machine because it helps us understand how to operate it safely and avoid potential dangers.

× My favorite machine is washing machine.

✓ My favorite machine is the washing machine.

The noun 'washing machine' is a singular, countable noun and requires a definite article 'the' when referring to a specific item known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' here is incorrect.

× I think that it is an essential matter for people to get and dry their clothes within few hours.

✓ I think that it is essential for people to wash and dry their clothes within a few hours.

The phrase 'get and dry' is incorrect; 'wash and dry' is appropriate for clothes. Also, 'within few hours' lacks the article 'a' before 'few' which is necessary in this context.

× Yes, it is a great invention that changed this modern era.

✓ Yes, they are great inventions that have changed this modern era.

The question refers to 'washing machines and sweeping machines' (plural), so the pronoun should be plural 'they' and the verb should agree accordingly. Also, 'have changed' is the correct present perfect tense to indicate an action affecting the present.

× Within that it is an easy way to limit their time and people are very busy in their work.

✓ Because of that, it is an easy way to save time, and people are very busy with their work.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Within that' is incorrect; 'Because of that' or 'Therefore' is appropriate. Also, 'limit their time' is incorrect; 'save time' is the correct expression. 'Busy in their work' should be 'busy with their work'.

× Sunday studies, so it is an essential method for people to wash their clothes.

✓ Since people study on Sundays, it is an essential method for them to wash their clothes.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'Since people study on Sundays' clarifies the reason. Also, 'method' is better replaced with 'way' or 'means' but kept as 'method' here for minimal change.

× Of course, really I read the instructions before using the machine.

✓ Of course, I really read the instructions before using the machine.

The adverb 'really' should be placed after the subject 'I' for correct word order in English.

× I do not know how to use it, so I will definitely read the instructions before using that machine.

✓ I do not know how to use it, so I will definitely read the instructions before using it.

The pronoun 'that machine' is redundant after already referring to 'it'. Using 'it' maintains clarity and avoids repetition.

× It is important to hear the instructions before using anything because we do not know is in danger or something.

✓ It is important to read the instructions before using anything because we do not know if it is dangerous or not.

'Hear the instructions' is incorrect; 'read the instructions' is appropriate. Also, 'we do not know is in danger or something' is ungrammatical; it should be 'we do not know if it is dangerous or not'.

× So it is really important to know and read the instructions all before it.

✓ So it is really important to know and read all the instructions before using it.

The phrase 'instructions all before it' is incorrect. 'All the instructions' is the correct phrase, and 'before using it' clarifies the timing and object.