Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but to improve, try to avoid redundancy and use more varied vocabulary. Also, adding linking words can make your response more coherent. For example, instead of repeating 'because', you can use 'as well as' or 'which'.

Exemplo: My favorite machine is definitely my phone, as it not only helps me stay connected with my loved ones but also keeps me informed about the latest news and current events.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. To improve, focus on clear sentence structure, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, washing machines are very important because they save a lot of time. For instance, a washing machine can clean my clothes in just 15 minutes, whereas washing by hand would take several hours.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words to make your response smoother. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary.

Exemplo: Usually, I don't read the instructions before using a machine; however, if the machine is complex, I prefer to read the installation and usage guidelines to ensure proper operation.

Sugestão: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. To improve, focus on clear sentence construction, avoid repetition, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, be specific about why reading instructions is important.

Exemplo: Yes, reading the instructions is important because it ensures safety and helps maintain the machine properly, which extends its lifespan.

× My favorite machine is of course my phone.

✓ My favorite machine is, of course, my phone.

The phrase 'of course' should be set off by commas to correctly indicate it as an interrupter in the sentence.

× it helps me in connecting with the people I love

✓ it helps me connect with the people I love

The verb 'help' is followed by the base form of the verb without 'in'. Using 'in connecting' is incorrect here.

× Yes, definitely washing machine since we are being machines are essential part of life nowadays because it saves a lot of time.

✓ Yes, definitely washing machines since washing machines are an essential part of life nowadays because they save a lot of time.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'washing machine' should be plural to match context; 'we are being machines' is incorrect and should be 'washing machines'; 'essential part' needs the article 'an'; 'it saves' should be 'they save' to agree with plural subject.

× A washing machine can wash my clothes in 15 minutes for which if I do it with my hand it will take hours to do it.

✓ A washing machine can wash my clothes in 15 minutes, whereas if I do it by hand, it will take hours.

The phrase 'with my hand' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'by hand'. Also, the sentence is improved by adding a comma and replacing 'for which' with 'whereas' for clarity.

× No, normally I don't like to read the instructions before using a machine.

✓ No, normally I don't like to read the instructions before using a machine.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.

× But if it is a really complex machine then I like to read the instructions for the installation and for use.

✓ But if it is a really complex machine, then I like to read the instructions for installation and use.

The article 'the' before 'installation' and 'use' is unnecessary here; also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause for clarity.

× But normally I don't use it.

✓ But normally I don't use them.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'instructions' which is plural, so the correct pronoun is 'them'.

× Yes, it is important to raise the instructions sometimes because of the safety measures and for the long run of for the long run of the machine uses and also it keeps the machine safe and. Maintained for the long time.

✓ Yes, it is important to read the instructions sometimes because of safety measures and for the long-term use of the machine; it also keeps the machine safe and well maintained for a long time.

The word 'raise' is incorrect; it should be 'read'. The phrase 'for the long run of the machine uses' is awkward and incorrect; 'for the long-term use of the machine' is correct. Also, the sentence was fragmented and needed restructuring for clarity and correctness.