Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition. Try to make your sentences more concise and clear, and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain why you like the machine with specific reasons.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the dishwasher because it helps clean many dishes quickly after we have dinner together. It saves time and effort, making it a great helper in the kitchen.

Sugestão: Your answer has some unclear parts and lacks coherence. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid hesitation or repeated words. Use linking words to explain your opinion and provide specific reasons or examples.

Exemplo: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help us keep our clothes and homes clean easily. Without them, daily chores would be much more difficult and time-consuming.

Sugestão: Your answer is quite natural but can be improved by correcting grammar and making the sentences clearer. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Avoid informal phrases like 'the Blogger well' and be more precise.

Exemplo: Normally, I don't read the instructions because they are written in a small booklet that is hard to read. Instead, I usually watch online videos or check websites to learn how to use the machine properly.

Sugestão: Your answer shows understanding but is incomplete and has some repetition. Try to complete your sentences and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and provide specific examples of safety concerns.

Exemplo: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because if you don't know how to use the machine properly, it can cause safety problems such as electric shocks or damage to the machine.

× My favorite machine at my home is dish washing machine because whenever we have dinner together it it will create much it will create many. Mass washing machine is really a great helper for cleaning all the dishes.

✓ My favorite machine at my home is the dishwashing machine because whenever we have dinner together, it creates a lot of mess. The washing machine is really a great helper for cleaning all the dishes.

The phrase 'dish washing machine' should be 'dishwashing machine' as one word. 'It it will create much it will create many' is incorrect; 'it creates a lot of mess' is clearer and grammatically correct. Also, 'Mass washing machine' seems to be a mishearing or typo; it should be 'The washing machine'. Singular and plural forms need to be consistent and correct.

× Yes, I think washing machine and sweating machines are important because I just can't imagine the life without washing machine.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because I just can't imagine life without a washing machine.

The singular 'washing machine' should be plural 'washing machines' to match 'sweeping machines'. 'Sweating machines' is incorrect; it should be 'sweeping machines'. Also, 'the life' should be 'life' without 'the'. Article usage with singular nouns needs correction.

× You know, how to close how how to how to wash our clothes up and keep it tidy and healthy condition like.

✓ You know, how to wash our clothes and keep them tidy and in a healthy condition.

The phrase 'how to close how how to how to wash our clothes up' is unclear and incorrect. 'Wash our clothes up' is informal and unnecessary; 'wash our clothes' is sufficient. 'Keep it tidy and healthy condition like' is incorrect; it should be 'keep them tidy and in a healthy condition'. Prepositions and pronouns need correction.

× Normally I don't really want to read the instruction before I use it because it was writing a tiny booklet and the words just made me feel very dizzy.

✓ Normally, I don't really want to read the instructions before I use it because it is written in a tiny booklet and the words just make me feel very dizzy.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines. 'It was writing' is incorrect; it should be 'it is written'. Verb tense and quantifier usage need correction.

× So I just check it out, check it online and watch some video or the Blogger well.

✓ So I just check it out online and watch some videos or bloggers as well.

'Check it out, check it online' is repetitive and awkward; 'check it out online' is better. 'Some video' should be plural 'some videos'. 'The Blogger well' is incorrect; it should be 'bloggers as well'. Pronoun and article usage need correction.

× Yes, I think it's really important to know how to operate them right, because if you don't have clue how to use them, you may you may have some safety concerns like electronic leak out and maybe broke the.

✓ Yes, I think it's really important to know how to operate them correctly because if you don't have a clue how to use them, you may have some safety concerns like electrical leaks or damage.

'Have clue' should be 'have a clue'. 'Electronic leak out' is incorrect; it should be 'electrical leaks'. 'Maybe broke the' is incomplete and incorrect; 'damage' or 'break something' is better. Pronoun and article usage, as well as sentence completion, need correction.