Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ví dụ minh họa, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời chính xác hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "my family go out" nên là "my family goes out" và "turn it on" nên là "turns it on" để phù hợp với chủ ngữ. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một câu kết để làm câu trả lời hoàn chỉnh hơn.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is definitely the vacuum robot because it is very convenient. For example, when my family goes out, my mother usually turns it on to clean the floor, so it is always tidy and dust-free. This machine saves us a lot of time and effort.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "I'll save the times to do another word", bạn có thể nói "They save time for people to do other tasks".

Exemplo: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in daily life because they help people save time. For instance, these machines allow us to finish household chores quickly, so we can focus on other activities.

Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và đưa ra ví dụ, nhưng có một số lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp như "guidance" nên là "instructions", "avoids me from wasting" nên là "helps me avoid wasting". Ngoài ra, "bacon robot" có thể là lỗi đánh máy, bạn nên nói rõ tên máy. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, chính xác và mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me avoid wasting time figuring out how it works. For example, I have a vacuum robot, and I always read its instructions carefully before using it.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ như "not expired at technology" nên là "not experienced with technology", "guidance before I use it" nên là "guidance before using it". Bạn nên diễn đạt rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu.

Exemplo: Yes, I think reading instructions is very important, especially for people who are not experienced with technology. For example, elderly people need to read the instructions carefully before using a machine to ensure they use it safely and effectively.

× For example, when my family go out, my mother usually turn it on to sweep my floor so my floor is always clean and tidy.

✓ For example, when my family goes out, my mother usually turns it on to sweep my floor so my floor is always clean and tidy.

The subject 'my family' is singular, so the verbs should be in the third person singular form 'goes' and 'turns' to agree with the subject.

× Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are really critical for humans daily life.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are really critical for human daily life.

The phrase 'humans daily life' is incorrect; 'human daily life' is the correct singular form to describe life in general.

× That's due to the fact that washing machines and sweeping machines, it can help people.

✓ That's due to the fact that washing machines and sweeping machines can help people.

The sentence incorrectly uses both 'washing machines and sweeping machines' and 'it' as subjects, causing redundancy. Removing 'it' corrects the sentence structure.

× I'll save the times to do another word.

✓ I'll save time to do other work.

The phrase 'save the times' is incorrect; 'save time' is the correct expression. Also, 'another word' should be 'other work' to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, I always read the guidance before using a machine as it avoids me from wasting my time to explore their convenience.

✓ Yes, I always read the guidance before using a machine as it prevents me from wasting my time exploring its functions.

The pronoun 'it' should refer to 'a machine' (singular), so 'their' is incorrect and replaced with 'its'. Also, 'avoids me from' is not idiomatic; 'prevents me from' is correct.

× For example, I have my bacon robot and I read the instructions before.

✓ For example, I have my vacuum robot and I read the instructions before using it.

Assuming 'bacon robot' is a typo for 'vacuum robot'. Also, adding 'using it' clarifies the sentence. 'Instructions' is plural and correctly used.

× Yes, I've been reading.

✓ Yes, I have read them.

The phrase 'I've been reading' is incomplete and awkward here; 'I have read them' is more appropriate to answer the question about reading instructions.

× The instruction is really critical, especially for those who are not expired at technology.

✓ The instructions are really critical, especially for those who are not experienced with technology.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Expired at technology' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'experienced with technology'.

× For example, the elderly have to read the guidance before I use it to make it more easy, make it easier to use safely and effectively.

✓ For example, the elderly have to read the guidance before using it to make it easier to use safely and effectively.

The pronoun 'I' is incorrect here; it should be a general statement about the elderly using the machine. Also, 'more easy' is incorrect; 'easier' is the correct comparative form.