Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有重复。建议简化句子，注意语法，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is definitely my computer because I use it for work, study, and playing games to relieve stress. It is the most important machine for me.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且内容不够具体。建议使用正确的语法，明确表达观点，并给出具体理由。

Exemplo: I think washing and sweeping machines are useful because they save time and effort, although we can do these tasks by hand.

Sugestão: 回答基本清楚，但句子不够连贯，且有语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意语法准确。

Exemplo: If the machine is complicated, I usually read the instructions first. Otherwise, I ask the seller or watch instruction videos online.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，使表达更清晰。

Exemplo: Yes, I think instructions are important because they explain how to use the machine and provide safety information to prevent accidents.

× If you see machine, definitely my computer, because I use my computer to work, to study in playing game, to release my stress.

✓ If you see machines, definitely my computer, because I use my computer to work, to study, to play games, and to relieve my stress.

这里的machine应该用复数形式machines，因为泛指多种机器。并且play game应改为play games，表示玩游戏的习惯。release my stress应改为relieve my stress，更符合英语表达习惯。

× If you see machine, definitely my computer, because I use my computer to work, to study in playing game, to release my stress.

✓ If you see machines, definitely my computer, because I use my computer to work, to study, to play games, and to relieve my stress.

动词后面接动名词时，play后面应接复数games，且study后不应接in playing game，应直接用不定式to play games。

× Anyway, most important machine must be my computer.

✓ Anyway, the most important machine must be my computer.

这里缺少定冠词the，表示特指最重要的机器。

× I don't think so, because we can washing the dishes and sweeping by our own hands and I think that machine is a kind of. Products provide some extra convenience.

✓ I don't think so, because we can wash the dishes and sweep by our own hands, and I think that machines are a kind of product that provides some extra convenience.

can后面应接动词原形wash和sweep，而不是动名词washing和sweeping。machine应为复数machines，products应为product，且句子结构需调整使其通顺。

× I don't think so, because we can washing the dishes and sweeping by our own hands and I think that machine is a kind of. Products provide some extra convenience.

✓ I don't think so, because we can wash the dishes and sweep by our own hands, and I think that machines are a kind of product that provides some extra convenience.

machine应为复数machines，products应为product，保持主谓一致和名词单复数一致。

× If the machine is complicated, I will read the instruction first or I will just ask for the seller or search some. Instruction video on the Internet.

✓ If the machine is complicated, I will read the instructions first or I will just ask the seller or search for some instruction videos on the Internet.

instruction应为复数instructions，表示说明书。ask for the seller应改为ask the seller，search后应加介词for，instruction video应为复数instruction videos。

× If the machine is complicated, I will read the instruction first or I will just ask for the seller or search some. Instruction video on the Internet.

✓ If the machine is complicated, I will read the instructions first or I will just ask the seller or search for some instruction videos on the Internet.

instruction和instruction video应使用复数形式instructions和instruction videos，表示多条说明和多个视频。

× Yes, I synced instructions not only provide the method of use of the machine, but also provides some safety information on it.

✓ Yes, I think instructions not only provide the method of using the machine, but also provide some safety information about it.

synced应为think，意思是“我认为”。instructions是复数，谓语动词应与之保持一致，使用provide而非provides。on it应改为about it，更符合表达习惯。

× Yes, I synced instructions not only provide the method of use of the machine, but also provides some safety information on it.

✓ Yes, I think instructions not only provide the method of using the machine, but also provide some safety information about it.

method of use应改为method of using，更符合英语习惯。

× It can prevent you from the danger of the machine maybe happened.

✓ It can prevent you from dangers that the machine may cause.

maybe happened结构不正确，应改为may cause，表示机器可能带来的危险。