Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it can be improved by avoiding redundancy and minor grammatical errors. For example, 'often regularly' is repetitive, and 'helps Maine unwind' seems to be a typo. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is my laptop because I use it regularly for work meetings as a professional. Additionally, I watch movies on it, which helps me relax after a busy day.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler sentences and linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural. Also, avoid incomplete sentences like 'So definitely it is a good.'

Exemplo: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort. Before these machines, people had to wash clothes by hand, which was tiring and time-consuming. Therefore, these machines have greatly improved our daily lives.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting sentence structure and grammar. Avoid sentence fragments and ensure smooth flow by using linking words. Also, be careful with word choice, for example, 'used and Blender' should be 'used a blender'.

Exemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how it works. For example, my friend once used a blender without reading the manual and ended up damaging it.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by avoiding sentence fragments and using more natural linking words. Also, try to be more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas.

Exemplo: Certainly, it is very important to read instructions to prevent mistakes or accidents. Without prior knowledge, people may misuse machines and put themselves in dangerous situations.

× it helps Maine unwind after a long and busy day.

✓ it helps me unwind after a long and busy day.

The pronoun 'Maine' is incorrect here; the correct pronoun is 'me' to refer to oneself. This is a common mistake where a proper noun is mistakenly used instead of a personal pronoun.

× they have a significant impact in our lives.

✓ they have a significant impact on our lives.

The correct preposition to use with 'impact' is 'on' rather than 'in'. Using 'impact in' is incorrect and changes the meaning of the sentence.

× Before these machines we used to wash out loads manually by our hand and it was a very hectic task and outs and tedious activity that most of the people would not like to do.

✓ Before these machines, we used to wash loads manually by hand and it was a very hectic and tedious activity that most people would not like to do.

The phrase 'wash out loads' is awkward; 'wash loads' is sufficient. 'By our hand' should be 'by hand'. Also, 'outs and tedious activity' seems to be a typographical error and should be 'and tedious activity'. 'Most of the people' is better as 'most people' for natural usage.

× So definitely it is a good.

✓ So definitely, it is good.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. Removing 'a' before 'good' corrects the sentence structure. 'Good' here is an adjective and does not need an article.

× I think it is important to get to know about the working process of the machine before just. Using it randomly or without any prior information.

✓ I think it is important to get to know the working process of the machine before just using it randomly or without any prior information.

The phrase 'get to know about' is incorrect; it should be 'get to know' without 'about'. Also, the period after 'just' is incorrect and breaks the sentence unnaturally.

× my friend used and Blender without having a knowledge of it and he just messed it up.

✓ my friend used a blender without having knowledge of it and he just messed it up.

'Used and Blender' is incorrect; it should be 'used a blender'. Also, 'having a knowledge' is incorrect; 'knowledge' is uncountable and does not take an article 'a'.

× It is important to read the instructions in order to avoid any mistakes or any accidents that can happen, because people often find themselves in a precarious situation when they use machines without having any prior information or. Or without reading their manual.

✓ It is important to read the instructions in order to avoid any mistakes or accidents that can happen, because people often find themselves in precarious situations when they use machines without having any prior information or without reading their manual.

The sentence is broken incorrectly with a period after 'or' and 'Or' starting a new sentence. Also, 'any accidents' is better than 'any accidents that can happen' for conciseness. 'A precarious situation' should be plural 'precarious situations' to match the general statement.