Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to avoid unclear words and pronunciation errors like 'Ariel' and 'microwear'. Also, keep your sentences concise and directly answer the question. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the microwave. It is very useful because I can quickly heat or cook food when I am tired. For example, after a long day, I often use it to prepare simple meals, which saves me a lot of time and effort.

Sugestão: Your answer should be more structured and clear. Avoid grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' properly to make your answer coherent. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are very important because many people are busy with work. For example, when I have urgent laundry to do, the washing machine helps me finish quickly and efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by avoiding repetition and making sentences more concise. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly to connect ideas. Try to use varied vocabulary to express your points.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using any machine because it provides important guidance. This helps me use the machine correctly and complete my tasks efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and grammatically correct. Avoid unclear phrases like 'do their folk in a good focus'. Use linking words properly and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Exemplo: Yes, it is very important to read instructions because they help us understand how to use things safely and correctly. For example, I always read instructions before starting any task to avoid mistakes and work efficiently.

× Go home.

✓ At home.

The phrase 'Go home' is a command and does not fit the context of the answer. The student likely meant to say 'At home' to indicate the location of the machines. This correction improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Well, there Ariel ample of machines in my house if I had to choose one.

✓ Well, there are ample machines in my house if I had to choose one.

The phrase 'there Ariel ample' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'there are ample' because 'machines' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× So I would like to talk about to microwear, which is very beneficial for everyone and I think that we can use in many ways.

✓ So I would like to talk about the microwave, which is very beneficial for everyone and I think that we can use it in many ways.

The phrase 'talk about to microwear' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'about' without 'to', and the noun is 'microwave'. Also, 'use in many ways' needs the pronoun 'it' to be grammatically correct.

× For instance, one hour I am tired, so I mostly prefer to Baker things in microware, which is very convenient for me.

✓ For instance, when I am tired, I mostly prefer to bake things in the microwave, which is very convenient for me.

The phrase 'one hour I am tired' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'when I am tired'. Also, 'Baker' should be 'bake', and 'microware' should be 'microwave'. This correction addresses quantifier misuse and spelling errors.

× Absolutely, it is very crucial for a individual washing machines and a sweeping machines are prominent be 'cause people nowadays workaholic and they can help them to wash your clothes.

✓ Absolutely, it is very crucial for an individual. Washing machines and sweeping machines are prominent because people nowadays are workaholics and they can help them to wash their clothes.

The article 'a' before 'individual' should be 'an' because 'individual' starts with a vowel sound. Also, 'a sweeping machines' is incorrect; it should be 'sweeping machines' without 'a' because it's plural. 'Be 'cause' should be 'because'. This correction addresses singular/plural issues and article usage.

× Absolutely, it is very crucial for a individual washing machines and a sweeping machines are prominent be 'cause people nowadays workaholic and they can help them to wash your clothes.

✓ Absolutely, it is very crucial for an individual. Washing machines and sweeping machines are prominent because people nowadays are workaholics and they can help them to wash their clothes.

The pronouns 'them' and 'your' are inconsistent. 'Them' refers to people, but 'your clothes' refers to the listener. It should be 'their clothes' to maintain consistency referring to people in general.

× For instance, when our am too busy and I have. Took my clothes very emergency so with the help of washing machine so it could be helpful for person.

✓ For instance, when I am too busy and I have to wash my clothes urgently, the washing machine is very helpful for a person.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting the sentence structure improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, most of the times I read the instructions before using any kind of machine because it gives me guidance which is very crucial for me.

✓ Yes, most of the time I read the instructions before using any kind of machine because it gives me guidance which is very crucial for me.

The phrase 'most of the times' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'most of the time' when referring to frequency.

× And I think that if I read the instructions of a particular thing, so it could be beneficial for me and I do my all work with the main focus and it would be good for me.

✓ And I think that if I read the instructions of a particular thing, it could be beneficial for me and I do all my work with main focus, which would be good for me.

The conjunction 'so' is unnecessary after 'if' clause. Also, 'my all work' should be 'all my work'. Removing redundant conjunctions and correcting word order improves sentence flow.

× Of course it is very necessity to read instructions becaused if a person cannot read instruction, they can do their folk in a good focus and they know what is good and what is bad for them.

✓ Of course, it is very necessary to read instructions because if a person cannot read instructions, they cannot do their work with good focus and they won't know what is good and what is bad for them.

'Very necessity' is incorrect; it should be 'very necessary'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Do their folk' is incorrect; it should be 'do their work'. This correction addresses quantifier and word choice errors.

× For example, whenever I do my work, so I read instruction first because it's always guide me in a good faith.

✓ For example, whenever I do my work, I read the instructions first because they always guide me in good faith.

The conjunction 'so' is unnecessary after 'whenever' clause. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'It's always guide me' is incorrect; it should be 'they always guide me'. 'In a good faith' should be 'in good faith'. This correction improves preposition and pronoun usage.