Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: I would say my favourite machine at home is the dishwasher because it saves a lot of time and effort. Moreover, it helps me multitask by freeing up time to do other things. Additionally, it conserves water and electricity, making it environmentally friendly.

Sugestão: Focus on grammatical accuracy and avoid awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Exemplo: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important these days because they save a lot of time. Consequently, people can focus on personal development or other activities instead of spending hours on housework.

Sugestão: Avoid unnecessary details that do not directly answer the question. Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to organise your answer logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine to avoid any damage. Although my husband doesn't, I believe reading instructions is important for safe and effective use.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but could be improved by correcting minor grammar errors and linking your ideas more smoothly. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Exemplo: I believe it is crucial to read instructions before using any machine, especially unfamiliar ones. For instance, we recently bought an electric toothbrush, and by reading the instructions, I avoided potential damage that my husband unfortunately caused.

× My I would say my favorite machine in my home is is a dishwasher.

✓ I would say my favorite machine in my home is a dishwasher.

The sentence contains redundant words 'My' and repeated 'is'. Removing 'My' at the start and one 'is' corrects the sentence structure and makes it clear.

× It's because it saves a lot of time and effort while multitasking other things that you need to get done.

✓ This is because it saves a lot of time and effort while multitasking other things that you need to get done.

Starting a sentence with 'It's because' is informal and can be unclear. Replacing it with 'This is because' provides a clearer and more formal explanation.

× I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are greatly important. In this days because it saves lots of time, it allows you to do more things that would develop yourself instead of spending time doing house worse.

✓ I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important these days because they save lots of time and allow you to do more things that help you develop yourself instead of spending time doing housework.

'In this days' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'these days'. 'Greatly important' is not idiomatic; 'very important' is better. 'It saves' should be 'they save' to agree with plural subject. 'House worse' is a mispronunciation of 'housework'. The sentence is corrected for prepositions, plural agreement, and word choice.

× But my house pin he he's a very handy man but he never read the instruction before using machine which he always makes fun of me because he thinks I'm a book smart.

✓ But my houseman, he is a very handy man, but he never reads the instructions before using a machine, and he always makes fun of me because he thinks I'm book smart.

'House pin' is likely a mishearing of 'houseman'. 'He he's' is redundant; use 'he is'. 'Read' should be 'reads' for third person singular. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Using machine' needs an article: 'using a machine'. 'Book smart' does not need 'a'. The sentence is corrected for pronoun use, verb agreement, articles, and clarity.

× But I think it's good to always read the instructions before using the machine to prevent any damage is.

✓ But I think it's good to always read the instructions before using the machine to prevent any damage.

The phrase 'damage is' is incorrect; 'damage' is uncountable and does not need 'is'. Removing 'is' corrects the sentence.

× I believe it is crucial to read the instructions before using any kind of machine, especially when it's not very familiar to you.

✓ I believe it is crucial to read the instructions before using any kind of machine, especially when it is not very familiar to you.

Contraction 'it's' is acceptable but expanding to 'it is' improves formality and clarity in this context.

× For example, recently we bought a a machine to brush my teeth.

✓ For example, recently we bought a machine to brush my teeth.

There is a repeated article 'a a'. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence.

× And because I read the instruction before, I was able to prevent the potential damages, which my husband did.

✓ And because I read the instructions before, I was able to prevent potential damage, which my husband did not.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Damages' is usually uncountable in this context, so 'damage' is better. The phrase 'which my husband did' is incomplete; adding 'not' clarifies the contrast. The sentence is corrected for plural, uncountable noun, and past tense clarity.