Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific reasons and examples. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine, which I bought for my family three years ago. It saves me a lot of time because I don't have to wash clothes by hand. This allows me to focus on other important tasks, making my daily routine easier and more efficient.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons to support your opinion. Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save people a lot of time. As a result, individuals can focus on more important tasks. Moreover, these machines make household chores much easier and more efficient.

Sugestão: Your response is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence. Be specific about when and why you read instructions.

Exemplo: It depends on the machine. For example, I have used the washing machine since childhood, so I don't usually read the instructions. However, if I use a machine for the first time, I prefer to read the instructions carefully to ensure I use it correctly and save time.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains contradictory statements. Make sure to clearly express your opinion and support it with reasons. Use complete sentences and avoid ambiguity to make your point clear.

Exemplo: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using any machine, especially electrical ones. This helps prevent damage to the machine and ensures user safety by avoiding accidents.

× My friend machine in my home is the washing machine which I bought for my family three years ago and I assume money for almost like 2 months.

✓ My favourite machine in my home is the washing machine which I bought for my family three years ago and I saved money for almost like 2 months.

The phrase 'My friend machine' is incorrect; it should be 'My favourite machine' to correctly express preference. Also, 'I assume money' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'I saved money'. This correction addresses singular/plural and word choice issues.

× I like it because it's still more money and indecision my time to do to focus on something else.

✓ I like it because it saves money and saves my time so I can focus on something else.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and phrases, making it unclear. 'It's still more money and indecision my time' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning by using 'it saves money and saves my time', which is grammatically correct and clear.

× And also very.

✓ And it is also very useful.

The sentence fragment 'And also very.' lacks a verb and object, making it incomplete. Adding 'it is also very useful' completes the sentence and conveys the intended meaning.

× Yeah, I do think is very important 'cause like this kind of machines save people a lot of time and I thought a lot of people to focus on the important task.

✓ Yeah, I do think it is very important because these kinds of machines save people a lot of time and help a lot of people to focus on important tasks.

The phrase 'this kind of machines' is incorrect; it should be 'these kinds of machines' to match plural noun 'machines'. Also, 'I thought a lot of people' is incorrect; it should be 'help a lot of people'. The correction fixes singular/plural agreement and verb usage.

× It has definitely Med household chores much easier and more efficient.

✓ It has definitely made household chores much easier and more efficient.

'Med' is a typo for 'made'. The verb 'has made' is the correct present perfect form. This correction fixes verb form and spelling.

× I think is it depends on what kind of machine I'm Jose I for example the washing machine, I'll be using it for every since my childhood, so which I don't need to check the instruction.

✓ I think it depends on what kind of machine I'm using. For example, the washing machine, I've been using it since my childhood, so I don't need to check the instructions.

The original sentence has missing subjects and incorrect verb forms. 'I think is it depends' should be 'I think it depends'. 'I'm Jose I' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'I'm using'. 'I'll be using it for every since my childhood' is incorrect; corrected to 'I've been using it since my childhood'. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions'.

× But if it's a first time juice would prefer to check the instruction first and make sure everything I did is right and also it saves some time and.

✓ But if it's the first time, I would prefer to check the instructions first and make sure everything I do is right, and also it saves some time.

'If it's a first time juice' is incorrect; corrected to 'if it's the first time'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Everything I did is right' should be 'everything I do is right' to maintain present tense. The sentence was incomplete; completed for clarity.

× Yeah, I don't think it's very important if it is instruction before use or kind of machines, especially when it comes to the electricity 'cause sometimes it can cause some damage to to the machine and also can make harm to human being.

✓ Yeah, I do think it's very important to read the instructions before using any kind of machine, especially when it comes to electricity, because sometimes it can cause damage to the machine and also harm to human beings.

The original sentence contradicts itself by saying 'I don't think it's very important' but then explaining why it is important. Corrected to 'I do think it's very important'. 'If it is instruction before use or kind of machines' is unclear; corrected to 'to read the instructions before using any kind of machine'. Also corrected 'make harm to human being' to 'harm to human beings'.

× So. Diets for the safety I think is very important to check the.

✓ So, for safety, I think it is very important to check the instructions.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Diets for the safety' is likely a mishearing of 'So, for safety'. The sentence is completed to convey the intended meaning clearly.