Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but needs to be more natural and coherent. Avoid short, fragmented sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more specific about why you like the air conditioner.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it keeps me cool during the hot days. Moreover, I can adjust its temperature to warm the room when it gets too cold, which makes it very convenient.

Sugestão: Your answer covers the main idea but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your points clearly. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases unnecessarily.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe both washing machines and sweeping machines are important because washing machines clean clothes thoroughly, while sweeping machines help keep the rooms clean efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using smoother sentence structures and linking words. Also, avoid repetition and ensure correct verb tenses for better clarity.

Exemplo: Most of the time, I don't read the instructions for machines that I already know how to use. However, if the machine is new to me and I am unsure how to operate it, I usually read the instructions provided in the booklet.

Sugestão: Your answer conveys the message but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and clearer expressions. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: Of course, reading the instructions is very important if you do not know how to use a machine. It is much safer to follow the guidelines in the booklet than to operate the machine without proper knowledge, which can be dangerous.

× My favorite machine is air conditioner.

✓ My favorite machine is the air conditioner.

In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. 'Air conditioner' is a singular countable noun, so it needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific item in the home.

× Because it keeps me. Cool.

✓ Because it keeps me cool.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. 'Because it keeps me cool' is a dependent clause and should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased to form a complete sentence.

× On the most of the time in in a day and whenever I feel it's be too colder, I can switch it to the. Hotter temperature to make it warm.

✓ Most of the time in a day, and whenever I feel it's too cold, I can switch it to a hotter temperature to make it warm.

The phrase 'On the most of the time' is incorrect; it should be 'Most of the time'. The phrase 'it's be too colder' is incorrect; 'it's too cold' is correct. Also, 'the hotter temperature' should be 'a hotter temperature' because it is not a specific known temperature.

× washing machines and sweeping machines both are important because they help us to make the.

✓ Washing machines and sweeping machines both are important because they help us.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'to make the.' which is incomplete and incorrect. The phrase 'help us to make the' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.

× Washing machine help us to clean the clothes thoroughly and sweeping machines also help us to make to clean the room efficiently.

✓ Washing machines help us to clean clothes thoroughly, and sweeping machines also help us to clean the room efficiently.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'Washing machine' should be plural 'Washing machines' to match 'help'. The phrase 'help us to make to clean' is incorrect; it should be 'help us to clean'. Also, 'the clothes' can be simplified to 'clothes' unless referring to specific clothes.

× Most of the time I don't read the instructions which are the of the machines which I know how to use.

✓ Most of the time, I don't read the instructions of the machines which I know how to use.

The phrase 'which are the of the machines' is incorrect and redundant. It should be simplified to 'instructions of the machines'. Also, a comma after 'Most of the time' improves readability.

× But if the machine is new to me and I don't I didn't know how to switch on and use it, I usually I read the instructions given.

✓ But if the machine is new to me and I don't know how to switch it on and use it, I usually read the instructions given.

The phrase 'I don't I didn't know' is incorrect and redundant. It should be 'I don't know'. Also, 'switch on' should be 'switch it on' to include the object. The sentence should be in present tense to match the habitual action.

× Of course, if you need didn't know how to use the machine instructions.

✓ Of course, if you don't know how to use the machine, instructions

The phrase 'need didn't know' is incorrect; it should be 'don't know'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs restructuring for clarity.

× Are very important to you becauses rather than using the machine without knowing the knowledge of the machine is far dangerous then.

✓ are very important to you because using the machine without knowing how it works is far more dangerous than

The sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect word usage: 'becauses' should be 'because', 'knowing the knowledge' is redundant, and 'far dangerous then' should be 'far more dangerous than'. The sentence needs to be completed for clarity.

× Taking the instructions from the booklet given by the company.

✓ taking the instructions from the booklet given by the company.

This is a sentence fragment without a subject or verb. It should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased to form a complete sentence.