Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words properly and keep sentences concise. For example, instead of repeating 'time consuming' and 'tiring', combine ideas smoothly and correct grammar such as 'makes my task easier' instead of 'more easier'.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it makes my chores easier and saves a lot of time. Washing clothes by hand is tiring and takes much longer, whereas the automatic machine completes the task quickly and efficiently.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating the same points and words like 'important' and 'time consuming'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and check subject-verb agreement, e.g., 'sweeping machines make' instead of 'makes'.

Exemplo: Yes, washing and sweeping machines are essential nowadays because they save time and effort. For instance, washing clothes by hand is tiring, but automatic machines make the process convenient. Similarly, sweeping machines help clean floors quickly and with less effort.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating the same idea multiple times. Use linking words to connect sentences and improve sentence structure. For example, replace 'reading instruction can really help me' repeated twice with a single clear statement.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because I am not very familiar with modern technology. Reading the instructions helps me understand how to operate the machine properly and safely.

Sugestão: Try to avoid awkward phrasing and redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so that' correctly. Also, use plural form 'instructions' and improve sentence clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, it is important to read the instructions because they prevent damage to the machine and ensure our safety. By following them, we can operate the machine correctly and avoid accidents.

× The favorite machine in my home is washing machine because it helps me to make my task more easier and saves time.

✓ The favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because it helps me to make my task easier and saves time.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'washing machine' to specify the particular machine being referred to. Also, 'more easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone suffices as it is a comparative adjective.

× The favorite machine in my home is washing machine because it helps me to make my task more easier and saves time.

✓ The favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because it helps me to make my task easier and saves time.

'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative form; adding 'more' is redundant and grammatically wrong.

× Moreover, I think a washing clothes by hand is a bit tiring process and consume a lot of time while whereas using automatic machines really help us to solve task within no time.

✓ Moreover, I think washing clothes by hand is a bit tiring process and consumes a lot of time, whereas using automatic machines really helps us to complete the task quickly.

'A washing clothes' is incorrect; 'washing clothes' is a gerund phrase and does not need an article. Also, 'consume' should be 'consumes' to agree with singular subject 'process'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'using automatic machines'. 'Solve task' is incorrect; 'complete the task' is appropriate.

× Moreover, I think a washing clothes by hand is a bit tiring process and consume a lot of time while whereas using automatic machines really help us to solve task within no time.

✓ Moreover, I think washing clothes by hand is a bit tiring process and consumes a lot of time, whereas using automatic machines really helps us to complete the task quickly.

The verbs 'consume' and 'help' must agree with their singular subjects 'process' and 'using automatic machines' respectively, so they should be 'consumes' and 'helps'.

× Moreover, I think a washing clothes by hand is a bit tiring process and consume a lot of time while whereas using automatic machines really help us to solve task within no time.

✓ Moreover, I think washing clothes by hand is a bit tiring process and consumes a lot of time, whereas using automatic machines really helps us to complete the task quickly.

'While whereas' is redundant; only one conjunction is needed. 'Whereas' is appropriate here to contrast two ideas.

× Yes, I think that washing machine and sweeping machines are important because in today's era they play an important role.

✓ Yes, I think that washing machines and sweeping machines are important because in today's era they play an important role.

'Washing machine' should be plural 'washing machines' to match 'sweeping machines' and maintain parallel structure.

× Moreover, sweeping machines makes our task more easier and less time consuming.

✓ Moreover, sweeping machines make our task easier and less time-consuming.

'Sweeping machines' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Also, 'more easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone is correct. 'Less time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'less time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× Moreover, sweeping machines makes our task more easier and less time consuming.

✓ Moreover, sweeping machines make our task easier and less time-consuming.

'More easier' is incorrect; 'easier' is the correct comparative form. 'Less time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'less time-consuming' when used adjectivally.

× Yes, I mostly prefer to read instructions before using a machine because I believe that I don't have much knowledge of using today's technology and I think reading instruction can really help me to operate the machines in a better way and reading instruction can really help me to deal with its operation.

✓ Yes, I mostly prefer to read instructions before using a machine because I believe that I don't have much knowledge of using today's technology and I think reading instructions can really help me to operate the machines in a better way and deal with their operation.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines. Also, 'its operation' should be 'their operation' to agree with plural 'machines'.

× Yes, I mostly prefer to read instructions before using a machine because I believe that I don't have much knowledge of using today's technology and I think reading instruction can really help me to operate the machines in a better way and reading instruction can really help me to deal with its operation.

✓ Yes, I mostly prefer to read instructions before using a machine because I believe that I don't have much knowledge of using today's technology and I think reading instructions can really help me to operate the machines in a better way and deal with their operation.

'Its operation' is incorrect because 'machines' is plural; the pronoun should be 'their' to agree in number.

× Yes, I think it is important to read the instruction as it helps us from any damage that may occur in the absence of reading instruction.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions as it helps us avoid any damage that may occur in the absence of reading instructions.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines. Also, 'helps us from any damage' is incorrect; 'helps us avoid any damage' is the correct expression.

× Yes, I think it is important to read the instruction as it helps us from any damage that may occur in the absence of reading instruction.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions as it helps us avoid any damage that may occur in the absence of reading instructions.

'Helps us from any damage' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'avoid' to express prevention of damage.

× Moreover, reading instruction will help us to operate the machine in a better way so that we are not harmed by machine or there is not any such accident caused by machine.

✓ Moreover, reading instructions will help us to operate the machine in a better way so that we are not harmed by the machine or there is no such accident caused by the machine.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. Also, 'by machine' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the machine. 'There is not any' is better expressed as 'there is no'.