Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to avoid short, choppy sentences and use linking words to make your answer flow better. Also, be specific about why you like the grinder and how it helps you.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the electric grinder. It is very useful because it helps me blend and grind ingredients quickly, which saves a lot of time when I cook.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear parts and grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and unclear phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because we live busy lives. They help us clean our clothes and homes quickly, saving us valuable time.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences, and avoid double negatives. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I read the instructions if I am not familiar with the machine. However, if I have already read them once, I usually do not read them again every time I use the machine.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and better vocabulary. Avoid vague phrases like 'robotic system' and use more precise language. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because using machines incorrectly can cause accidents or damage. Understanding how to operate them safely helps prevent harm.

× In this modern era. There is so many machine we're using in our domestic life.

✓ In this modern era, there are so many machines we are using in our domestic life.

The phrase 'There is so many machine' is incorrect because 'machine' is singular but 'many' requires a plural noun. Also, 'There is' should be 'There are' to agree with the plural noun 'machines'. Suggestion: Use 'There are' with plural nouns and ensure noun number matches quantifiers like 'many'.

× In my home. The most favorite machine is our grinder.

✓ In my home, the most favorite machine is our grinder.

The original sentence is fragmented into two incomplete sentences. 'In my home.' is a sentence fragment and should be connected to the next sentence with a comma. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments by connecting related ideas properly.

× It's really helpful gadgets.

✓ It's a really helpful gadget.

'Gadgets' is plural but 'It' refers to singular. Also, 'helpful' is an adjective modifying 'gadgets', so the noun and pronoun must agree in number. Suggestion: Match singular pronouns with singular nouns and use articles appropriately.

× We use its electrical and we can blend or grind anything in that.

✓ We use its electricity and we can blend or grind anything with it.

'Electrical' is an adjective and incorrect here; 'electricity' is the noun needed. Also, 'in that' is incorrect; 'with it' is the proper prepositional phrase to indicate the tool used. Suggestion: Use correct noun forms and appropriate prepositions to express means or instruments.

× Yes, of course. We all are living a busy life nowadays, so washing machines and swiping machines are very much important to clean our home and clean our clothings there.

✓ Yes, of course. We are all living busy lives nowadays, so washing machines and sweeping machines are very important to clean our homes and our clothes.

'We all are living a busy life' should be 'We are all living busy lives' to match plural subjects. 'Swiping machines' is a mispronunciation of 'sweeping machines'. 'Very much important' is incorrect; 'very important' is correct. 'Clothings' is uncountable and should be 'clothes'. Suggestion: Use correct plural forms, correct vocabulary, and proper adjective usage.

× We don't get much time to do this kind of stuff if there is a cloud. Close. Washing machine.

✓ We don't get much time to do this kind of stuff if there is a power outage. Close. Washing machine.

The phrase 'if there is a cloud. Close. Washing machine.' is unclear and fragmented. Likely intended to say 'if there is a power outage, the washing machine cannot be used.' Suggestion: Use clear and complete sentences to express ideas.

× Yes, if I have no idea about the machine, but I'm using, I try to read the instruction before using it.

✓ Yes, if I have no idea about the machine I am using, I try to read the instructions before using it.

The phrase 'but I'm using' is unnecessary and disrupts sentence flow. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as machines usually have multiple instructions. Suggestion: Avoid unnecessary conjunctions and use plural forms when appropriate.

× But if I have already read it one time, I always try to don't try to follow the instruction before every did.

✓ But if I have already read it once, I try not to follow the instructions every time.

'One time' is better expressed as 'once'. 'I always try to don't try to follow' is incorrect; 'I try not to follow' is correct. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Before every did' is unclear and incorrect. Suggestion: Use correct expressions for frequency and negation, and pluralize countable nouns.

× Yes it is. Without reading the instruction, people often get something wrong, get harmed by using some machines.

✓ Yes, it is. Without reading the instructions, people often do something wrong or get harmed by using some machines.

'Get something wrong' is incorrect; 'do something wrong' is the correct expression. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. Suggestion: Use correct idiomatic expressions and plural forms.

× So it's all about robotic system.

✓ So it's all about the robotic system.

'Robotic system' is a singular noun phrase that requires the definite article 'the'. Suggestion: Use articles appropriately before singular countable nouns.

× We all should know the system, how to use it, otherwise it could be dangerous, it could occur an accident.

✓ We all should know the system and how to use it; otherwise, it could be dangerous and could cause an accident.

'It could occur an accident' is incorrect; 'cause an accident' is the correct phrase. Also, the sentence needs conjunctions and punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: Use correct verbs with nouns and proper sentence connectors.