Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors such as 'a impatient' instead of 'impatient' and 'patients level' instead of 'patience level'. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question first, then add supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person generally. However, I tend to feel anxious and impatient during unexpected exams or activities. Nevertheless, I am actively working on improving my patience and hope to become more composed soon.

Sugestão: Your answer repeats previous points and has grammatical mistakes like 'with our preparation' instead of 'without preparation'. To improve, directly answer the question, use linking words to connect ideas, and provide specific reasons for your impatience. Avoid repeating phrases from earlier answers.

Exemplo: I feel impatient mainly during sudden exams or unexpected activities because I get anxious when I have to perform under pressure without proper preparation. This makes it difficult for me to stay calm, but I am trying to improve my patience.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and contains hesitations and repetitions like 'if if the the something is is'. To improve, avoid filler words, complete your thoughts, and use linking words to contrast feelings about interesting and uninteresting tasks. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary.

Exemplo: It depends on the task. If I find it interesting, I feel happy and grateful to complete it even if it takes a long time. However, if the task is boring, I tend to feel restless and impatient.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors such as 'patience and faith walks' instead of 'walk', and 'requires patient' instead of 'requires patience'. To improve, use correct grammar, directly answer the question, and provide clear reasons why patience is important in your job.

Exemplo: Yes, my job in the legal profession requires a great deal of patience because dealing with complex cases and clients demands calmness and perseverance.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains awkward phrases like 'nuisance of the variety' and 'in a physical label'. Also, 'I walked towards my impatient level' is confusing. To improve, use clearer expressions, avoid filler words, and explain how your patience has developed with specific reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because with experience, I have learned to handle emotional and physical challenges calmly, which has helped me become more composed.

× I am a impatient person at that point of time and I'm very anxious.

✓ I am an impatient person at that point of time and I'm very anxious.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'impatient'. This is a common article usage rule in English.

× I'm working on my patients level and I hope to get there soon.

✓ I'm working on my patience level and I hope to get there soon.

The word 'patients' is a plural noun meaning multiple patients; the correct noun here is 'patience', which means the ability to wait calmly.

× As I said earlier that and during sudden exam or an unexpected activity it I am very anxious and when I perform under pressure with our preparation, I find it very hard to stay calm.

✓ As I said earlier, during a sudden exam or an unexpected activity, I am very anxious, and when I perform under pressure without preparation, I find it very hard to stay calm.

The original sentence has redundant words and incorrect conjunctions causing confusion. Removing 'that and' and correcting 'with our preparation' to 'without preparation' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× when I perform under pressure with our preparation

✓ when I perform under pressure without preparation

The phrase 'with our preparation' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'without preparation' to indicate lack of readiness causing anxiety.

× I come from a legal profession and patience and faith walks hand in hand.

✓ I come from the legal profession and patience and faith walk hand in hand.

'Legal profession' is a singular noun and should be preceded by 'the' as a specific field. Also, 'patience and faith' is a plural subject, so the verb should be 'walk' not 'walks'.

× Yes, my job requires patient and without patient I believe the legal profession cannot hold up to the factor that they require at some point of time.

✓ Yes, my job requires patience and without patience I believe the legal profession cannot hold up to the factors that it requires at some point in time.

'Patient' is an adjective or noun meaning a person receiving medical care; the correct noun here is 'patience'. Also, 'factor' should be plural 'factors' to match the context, and 'they' should be 'it' referring to 'legal profession'.

× cannot hold up to the factor that they require at some point of time.

✓ cannot hold up to the factors that it requires at some point in time.

The phrase 'at some point of time' is better expressed as 'at some point in time' in English.

× Yes, I'm more patient now, patient now than when I was a child, because growing up you understand the nuisance of the variety that life throws to you, be it in a emotional level or in a physical label.

✓ Yes, I'm more patient now than when I was a child, because growing up you understand the nuisance of the variety that life throws at you, be it on an emotional level or a physical level.

The sentence has repeated words and incorrect prepositions. 'Throws to you' should be 'throws at you'. Also, 'a emotional level' should be 'an emotional level' and 'physical label' should be 'physical level'.

× life throws to you, be it in a emotional level or in a physical label.

✓ life throws at you, be it on an emotional level or a physical level.

The correct preposition is 'throws at you'. Also, 'in a emotional level' should be 'on an emotional level' and 'physical label' is a wrong word, it should be 'physical level'.

× So I walked towards my, you know, impatient level.

✓ So I have worked on reducing my impatience level.

The original sentence is unclear and awkward. The correction clarifies the intended meaning that the speaker has worked on becoming less impatient.