Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如"I always patient"应为"I am always patient"。建议注意动词形式和时态的正确使用。此外，回答中缺少连接词，导致句子之间衔接不够自然。可以适当使用连接词如"because"或"so"来使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I am a patient person because I always take time to understand what others are saying before giving feedback. This patience also helps me persist in achieving my goals.

Sugestão: 回答中表达有些不自然，如"I'm too hard"应为"I'm too hard on myself"。建议使用更准确的表达方式，并注意句子结构的完整性。同时，使用连接词如"for example"很好，但可以增加更多细节使内容更具体。

Exemplo: Sometimes, I am too hard on myself because I want to achieve my goals quickly. For example, when I try to memorize new vocabulary, I get impatient if I can't remember the words fast enough.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如"persist on this thing"应为"persist in doing it"，"I would die to avoid from learning it"表达不自然。建议使用更地道的表达，并注意句子简洁和逻辑清晰。

Exemplo: It depends on the task. If I enjoy it, I am willing to spend a lot of time on it, like learning English. However, if it's something I dislike, such as mathematics, I tend to avoid it.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复和冗余。可以先明确主题句，再用具体细节支持。

Exemplo: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I need to create advertising postcards. It takes time to come up with creative ideas and to edit the pictures carefully.

Sugestão: 回答中时态使用不当，如"I can't focus"应为过去时"I couldn't focus"。建议注意时态一致性，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。内容具体，表达清晰，可以稍作润色。

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. When I was a child, I couldn't focus on one task for more than 20 minutes. However, now I can concentrate on things I enjoy, such as creating postcards, for several hours.

× I always patient to other people.

✓ I am always patient with other people.

这里需要使用介词'with'来表达对某人的耐心，'patient to'是不正确的搭配。正确表达是'patient with someone'。

× I can take a long time to understand what they are talking about and give them some feedback.

✓ I can take a long time understanding what they are talking about and give them some feedback.

动词'take'后面接时间段时，后面的动词应使用动名词形式，表示花时间做某事。

× So I think I'm a patient person in real life and this makes me have more persistence to do things that I want to do.

✓ So I think I'm a patient person in real life and this makes me more persistent in doing things that I want to do.

'persistence'是名词，句中需要形容词形式'persistent'来修饰主语，同时'persist in doing something'是固定搭配。

× There are sometimes I'm too hard, too eager to achieve something that I want to do.

✓ Sometimes I am too hard on myself, too eager to achieve something that I want to do.

原句结构混乱，'There are sometimes'用法错误，应直接说'Sometimes I am...'，并且补充'hard on myself'使表达完整。

× when I want to recite some new vocabularies, I just want to recite it very quickly,

✓ when I want to recite some new vocabulary, I just want to recite it very quickly,

'vocabulary'作为不可数名词，不用复数形式。

× and when I found I can't remember it quickly, I will become angry.

✓ and when I find I can't remember it quickly, I become angry.

时态错误，'found'应为现在时'find'，且后半句用一般现在时更合适。

× Well, it depends. If it is something that I like, I would love to persist on this thing like when I learned else I would spare some time from my work to to learn.

✓ Well, it depends. If it is something that I like, I would love to persist in this thing. Like when I learn something else, I would spare some time from my work to learn.

'persist'后应接介词'in'，'learned else'表达不清，改为'learn something else'更准确。

× But if if it's learning mathematics then I would die to avoid from learning it.

✓ But if it's learning mathematics, then I would try to avoid learning it.

'die to avoid from'表达错误，正确表达是'try to avoid learning it'。

× As it does my job requires me to do some credit postcards to advertise for our companies.

✓ Yes, it does. My job requires me to make some credit postcards to advertise for our company.

句子结构混乱，'As it does'不合适，改为'Yes, it does.'更自然，'companies'应为单数'company'。

× So it takes a lot of time for you to think to come up with new ideas and you need to take a long a long time to fix and adjust it the pictures so it's.

✓ So it takes a lot of time to think and come up with new ideas, and you need to spend a long time fixing and adjusting the pictures.

重复使用'a long a long time'错误，'fix and adjust it the pictures'语序错误，应为'fixing and adjusting the pictures'。

× Yes, definitely. When I was a child, I remember I can't focus on doing one thing even for like 20 minutes.

✓ Yes, definitely. When I was a child, I remember I couldn't focus on doing one thing even for like 20 minutes.

时态错误，回忆过去应使用过去时'couldn't'。

× But now I can concentrate the things I like for a long time.

✓ But now I can concentrate on the things I like for a long time.

动词'concentrate'后应接介词'on'。

× Like I can sit in front of my computer just doing my work, create postcards for for three hours.

✓ Like I can sit in front of my computer just doing my work, creating postcards for three hours.

'create'应改为动名词'creating'以保持句子结构一致，且去掉重复的'for'。