Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较复杂且有语法错误，建议简化句子结构，注意时态和冠词的使用，使表达更自然流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I am a patient person now. When I was young, I was less patient because I didn't like listening to others' opinions. However, now I often work with my classmates, so I have learned to be more patient.

Sugestão: 回答内容不够清晰，表达混乱，语法错误较多。建议明确表达原因，使用正确的时态和主谓一致，避免重复。

Exemplo: I feel impatient when my mom has a different opinion from mine and insists on it. This often makes me feel frustrated because we cannot agree.

Sugestão: 表达不够自然，词汇使用不准确，如“peace”应为“peaceful”。建议使用更准确的词汇和连贯的句子结构。

Exemplo: When I have to do something for a long time, I feel peaceful. It helps me clear my mind and think deeply about many things.

Sugestão: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，表达重复。建议简化句子，注意动词形式和冠词使用，使表达更清晰。

Exemplo: Yes, my job requires me to be patient because we often work in teams. I need to listen to others' opinions carefully and think before responding.

Sugestão: 语法错误明显，如“I patient a lot”应为“I am more patient”。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，表达更准确。

Exemplo: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. Before, I used to get annoyed when others talked about me, but now I listen patiently to them.

× Yes I'm a patient person and although I'm not when I was young because at that time I have no patience to listen others opinion, but now I need to do a lot of work with my classmates so I must be patient.

✓ Yes, I'm a patient person, although I wasn't when I was young because at that time I had no patience to listen to others' opinions, but now I need to do a lot of work with my classmates so I must be patient.

句中描述过去的情况时，动词时态应使用过去式，如"wasn't"和"had"，而不是现在时"am not"和"have"。此外，"listen others opinion"缺少介词"to"，且"opinion"应为复数形式。

× Yes I'm a patient person and although I'm not when I was young because at that time I have no patience to listen others opinion, but now I need to do a lot of work with my classmates so I must be patient.

✓ Yes, I'm a patient person, although I wasn't when I was young because at that time I had no patience to listen to others' opinions, but now I need to do a lot of work with my classmates so I must be patient.

动词"listen"后应接介词"to"，表示倾听某人。缺少介词会导致表达不完整。

× Yes I'm a patient person and although I'm not when I was young because at that time I have no patience to listen others opinion, but now I need to do a lot of work with my classmates so I must be patient.

✓ Yes, I'm a patient person, although I wasn't when I was young because at that time I had no patience to listen to others' opinions, but now I need to do a lot of work with my classmates so I must be patient.

"others opinion"中"opinion"应为复数形式"opinions"，因为指的是多个人的意见。

× While that may be my mom's attitude about something and she always have a different opinion with me so she said that a lot, It's made me feel really impatient.

✓ While that may be my mom's attitude about something and she always has a different opinion from me, so she says that a lot. It makes me feel really impatient.

"she always have"应为"she always has"，主谓一致问题；"a different opinion with me"应改为"a different opinion from me"，介词使用错误；"she said that a lot"时态不对，应为现在时"she says that a lot"；"It's made me feel"应为"It makes me feel"，时态错误。

× While that may be my mom's attitude about something and she always have a different opinion with me so she said that a lot, It's made me feel really impatient.

✓ While that may be my mom's attitude about something and she always has a different opinion from me, so she says that a lot. It makes me feel really impatient.

主语"she"是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"has"和"says"，否则主谓不一致。

× While that may be my mom's attitude about something and she always have a different opinion with me so she said that a lot, It's made me feel really impatient.

✓ While that may be my mom's attitude about something and she always has a different opinion from me, so she says that a lot. It makes me feel really impatient.

表达意见不同应使用介词"different opinion from"，而非"with"。

× While that may be my mom's attitude about something and she always have a different opinion with me so she said that a lot, It's made me feel really impatient.

✓ While that may be my mom's attitude about something and she always has a different opinion from me, so she says that a lot. It makes me feel really impatient.

"she said that a lot"和"It's made me feel"描述的是习惯性和当前感受，应使用一般现在时。

× I feel really peace and I think do something for a long time can clear my mind, make me have a lot of thinking.

✓ I feel really peaceful and I think doing something for a long time can clear my mind and make me have a lot of thoughts.

"peace"是名词，形容感受应使用形容词"peaceful"；"do something"后应使用动名词形式"doing"；"make me have a lot of thinking"表达不自然，改为"make me have a lot of thoughts"更合适。

× I feel really peace and I think do something for a long time can clear my mind, make me have a lot of thinking.

✓ I feel really peaceful and I think doing something for a long time can clear my mind and make me have a lot of thoughts.

动词"think"后接动词作主语时，应使用动名词形式"doing"。

× we often do our work in a team so at this time we need to thinking and listening others opinions.

✓ We often do our work in a team, so at this time we need to think and listen to others' opinions.

"need to"后应接动词原形，不能用动名词"thinking"和"listening"；"listening others opinions"缺少介词"to"，且"opinions"应加所有格"others'"。

× we often do our work in a team so at this time we need to thinking and listening others opinions.

✓ We often do our work in a team, so at this time we need to think and listen to others' opinions.

"need to"后应接动词原形，不能用动名词形式。

× we often do our work in a team so at this time we need to thinking and listening others opinions.

✓ We often do our work in a team, so at this time we need to think and listen to others' opinions.

动词"listen"后应接介词"to"，表示倾听某人。

× Yes definitely I patient a lot then when I was a child.

✓ Yes, definitely I was more patient then when I was a child.

"patient"是形容词，缺少系动词"was"；"a lot then"表达不清，应改为"more patient then"表示比较。

× Yes definitely I patient a lot then when I was a child.

✓ Yes, definitely I was more patient then when I was a child.

"patient"是形容词，需用系动词"was"连接；"a lot"用来修饰动词或形容词时应改为比较级"more patient"。

× When I was a child I always be annoying when some others saying about me but now I always be patient and listening to them.

✓ When I was a child, I was always annoyed when others said things about me, but now I am always patient and listen to them.

"I always be annoying"应为"I was always annoyed"，表达被动感受；"some others saying about me"应为"others said things about me"；"I always be patient and listening"应为"I am always patient and listen"，保持时态和语态一致。