Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了你认为自己有耐心，但句子结构混乱，词汇使用不准确，影响了表达的清晰度。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇，并直接回答问题。

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I have experience helping a primary school teacher, where I needed to be attentive and patient with children every day.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，并具体说明让你感到不耐烦的情境。

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I have to wait in long lines, especially during hot summer days, because it can be uncomfortable and tiring.

Sugestão: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议用简单明了的句子表达感受，并使用恰当的词汇描述情绪。

Exemplo: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel bored, but I try to stay focused and patient to complete the task.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议直接回答问题并补充具体细节，使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

Exemplo: Yes, my internship as a tour guide requires me to be patient because I often need to answer many questions from customers calmly.

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构和语法错误影响理解。建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have gained more life experience and learned to consider others' feelings.

× I have worked as the helper of the teacher in a primary instance and I need to phase out the children's every day and I need to take patients and be attentive to.

✓ I have worked as a helper to the teacher in a primary school and I need to take care of the children every day and I need to be patient and attentive.

这里“the helper”应改为“a helper”，表示泛指；“primary instance”应为“primary school”，更符合语境；“phase out the children's every day”表达不正确，应为“take care of the children every day”；“take patients”应为“be patient”，因为“patient”是形容词，表示有耐心。

× I think there will be some several reasons that will make me feel impatient.

✓ I think there are several reasons that make me feel impatient.

“will be some several reasons”中“will be”不合适，表达一般事实应使用现在时；“some several”重复，应只用“several”；“will make”改为“make”更符合一般现在时态。

× when I clean for some entertainment issues, if there are many people to wait and I need to curing in a hot summer, it will make me feel impatient.

✓ when I clean for some entertainment venues, if there are many people waiting and I need to work in a hot summer, it makes me feel impatient.

“clean for some entertainment issues”表达不清，应为“clean for some entertainment venues”；“people to wait”应为“people waiting”；“need to curing”应为“need to work”或“need to endure”，动词形式错误。

× I think it may be boring and make people getting patient such a long time doing something.

✓ I think it may be boring and make people patient when doing something for such a long time.

“make people getting patient”中“getting”用法错误，应为“make people patient”；“such a long time doing something”应调整为“when doing something for such a long time”，使句子更通顺。

× We have to prepare for that and we need to challenge ourselves without being terrible and anxiety.

✓ We have to prepare for that and we need to challenge ourselves without feeling terrible and anxious.

“without being terrible and anxiety”中“terrible”用法不当，应为“feeling terrible”；“anxiety”是名词，应改为形容词“anxious”。

× such as my inter time internship employment, I choose to be a a service of guide in the tourism instance when I face the customers I need to be.

✓ such as my internship, I chose to be a tour guide in the tourism industry. When I face customers, I need to be patient.

“inter time internship employment”表达不清，应简化为“my internship”；“a a service of guide”应为“a tour guide”；“tourism instance”应为“tourism industry”；句子结构不完整，需拆分并补充。

× Yes, I definitely think I have more patience now than when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I definitely think I have more patience now than I did when I was a child.

比较句中应使用过去时“did”来对应“when I was a child”，使时态一致。

× As a child I don't have any experience about the society and I don't need to think about others.

✓ As a child, I didn't have any experience of society and I didn't need to think about others.

“experience about the society”应为“experience of society”；时态应与“as a child”对应，改为过去时“didn't have”和“didn't need”。

× But when I getting older I have due so many experiences that were teaching me to stay.

✓ But as I get older, I have had many experiences that have taught me to be patient.

“when I getting older”应为“as I get older”；“have due so many experiences”表达错误，应为“have had many experiences”；“were teaching me to stay”应为“have taught me to be patient”，更符合语境。