Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法有误，如时态和单复数错误。建议注意时态一致性和主谓一致，避免语法错误。

Exemplo: Yes, I am, although I was not very patient before my kids were born. I have become more patient since children require a lot of patience.

Sugestão: 回答中表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，且时间表达混乱。建议理清时间表达，使用正确语法，并使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: I feel impatient when someone is late. For example, if we need to leave at 8:00 but my daughter is still having breakfast at 7:50, I start to feel impatient.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意动词时态和单复数。

Exemplo: Most of the time, I find it difficult to start, but once I begin, I try my best to concentrate and usually do well with such tasks.

Sugestão: 回答较好，但句子连接稍显生硬。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅自然。

Exemplo: Oh yes, of course. I believe every job requires patience. As an application designer, my work can sometimes be really difficult and sophisticated, so a lot of patience is necessary.

Sugestão: 回答中表达不够准确，句子结构有待改进。建议简化句子结构，避免复杂表达，提升清晰度。

Exemplo: Yes, of course. I think most people become more patient as they grow up because children find it hard to concentrate for a long time. However, my daughter is more patient than I was at her age.

× kids always requires a lot of patience.

✓ kids always require a lot of patience.

这里的主语是复数形式“kids”，谓语动词应该用复数形式“require”，而不是单数形式“requires”。

× if we have to go out at 8:00 but my daughter is still have has her breakfast, when on 750 I will become impatient.

✓ if we have to go out at 8:00 but my daughter is still having her breakfast, when on 7:50 I will become impatient.

“have”应改为现在进行时“having”，表示动作正在进行中。此外，“has”是多余的，应删除。时间“750”应改为“7:50”，符合时间表达习惯。

× In most of times I may feel difficult to start, but once I started I will try my best to concentrate and usually I do this kind of things well.

✓ Most of the time I may feel it difficult to start, but once I start I will try my best to concentrate and usually I do these kinds of things well.

“most of times”应改为“most of the time”，表示大多数时候。“feel difficult”应加“it”作形式宾语。动词时态应保持一致，“started”改为“start”。“this kind of things”应改为“these kinds of things”，保持数量一致。

× My job as an application designer, sometimes it can be really difficult and sophisticated.

✓ My job as an application designer is sometimes really difficult and sophisticated.

原句缺少谓语动词，应加上“is”使句子完整。

× But my daughter is more patient than I when I was a kid.

✓ But my daughter is more patient than I was when I was a kid.

比较结构中省略了“was”，应补充完整，保持句子结构正确。