Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by directly stating your patience and giving specific examples. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, explain why you are considered patient and how you interact with elderly people and children.

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I enjoy spending time with elderly people and children. I like to listen to their stories and play games with them, which requires patience and understanding.

Sugestão: Focus on giving a clear and concise answer. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Explain specifically why advertisements make you impatient and how it affects you.

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I watch advertisements on YouTube because they are often boring and do not provide any useful information. Therefore, I feel like I am wasting my time watching them.

Sugestão: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to show contrast and be specific about your feelings and reasons.

Exemplo: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually enjoy it if I like the task. However, sometimes I feel frustrated if I think I could complete it more quickly and efficiently.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly. Use linking words to explain why your future job requires patience and give specific reasons related to teaching children.

Exemplo: Although I am not working now, my future job as a teacher will require a lot of patience because children often like to play and enjoy their time, so I will need to be understanding and calm.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent and natural by clearly comparing your past and present patience. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. As a child, I was impatient because I wanted everything quickly, but now I understand the importance of waiting and being calm.

× There are a lot of people told me that I am patient person because I can't spend a lot of time with elderly people and with children.

✓ There are a lot of people who told me that I am a patient person because I can't spend a lot of time with elderly people and with children.

The sentence is missing the relative pronoun 'who' after 'people' to correctly connect the clause. Also, 'patient person' needs the article 'a' before it because 'person' is a singular countable noun.

× Finish, speak to them or play with them.

✓ I can't finish, speak to them, or play with them.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'I can't' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence structure.

× I lose my passion when I see advertisement in YouTube.

✓ I lose my passion when I see advertisements on YouTube.

The noun 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match the context. Also, the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to platforms like YouTube.

× So why I watch it?

✓ So why do I watch it?

In questions, the auxiliary verb 'do' is needed before the subject 'I' to form a correct question structure in present simple tense.

× Why I lose time with that?

✓ Why do I lose time on that?

The preposition 'on' is more appropriate when talking about spending time on something. Also, the question needs the auxiliary 'do' for correct structure.

× some time I really love what I do if if it take a lot of time or not.

✓ Sometimes I really love what I do whether it takes a lot of time or not.

'Some time' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. The verb 'take' should be 'takes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'whether' is better than 'if' in this context.

× But sometime I, I, I feel like I, I lose my I, I lose my time in something I can do it faster way I should probably.

✓ But sometimes I feel like I lose my time on something I could do in a faster way, probably.

The sentence is fragmented and repetitive. 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. The phrase is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So children, teachers.

✓ So children are like teachers.

The original phrase is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'are like' clarifies the relationship. However, context suggests the student meant 'So, as a teacher, I will deal with children.' This correction assumes the intended meaning.

× So yeah, it's need patience because I will deal with children who who love enjoying their time and play.

✓ So yeah, it needs patience because I will deal with children who love enjoying their time and playing.

'It's need' should be 'it needs' to agree with singular subject. Also, 'play' should be 'playing' to match the gerund form after 'enjoy'.

× When I was child I, I, I am impatient because I love a blank.

✓ When I was a child, I was impatient because I loved a blank.

'Child' needs the article 'a'. The verb tense should be past 'was' to match 'when I was a child'. 'Love' should be past tense 'loved' to maintain tense consistency. 'A blank' is unclear; possibly a mishearing or error, but left as is.

× So this is children how it looks. They they I'm patient.

✓ So this is how children are. They are impatient.

The sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Corrected to a clear statement about children being impatient. 'I'm patient' is likely a misstatement; context suggests 'impatient'.