Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to answer the question directly with a clear opinion. Avoid asking the examiner for the meaning. Use simple and natural sentences to express your thoughts.

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can stay calm even in difficult situations.

Sugestão: Make your answer complete and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples. Avoid incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: I usually feel impatient when I am in a rush, especially during meetings when I want to know important details quickly.

Sugestão: Complete your sentences and provide clear examples. Use linking words to explain your feelings and reasons. Avoid leaving sentences unfinished.

Exemplo: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel bored, especially if the task is not interesting to me, like cooking.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but try to use more natural phrasing and linking words to improve fluency. Also, avoid redundancy by choosing concise expressions.

Exemplo: Yes, my job as an accountant definitely requires patience because I need to pay close attention to details, solve problems, and prepare accurate reports.

Sugestão: Use more natural expressions and linking words to make your answer smoother. Avoid repeating similar words and try to be concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have matured and gained wisdom to understand situations better.

× I don't know exactly what the question all means so much.

✓ I don't exactly understand what the question means.

The original sentence has an incorrect word order and unnecessary words, making it unclear. The correction simplifies the sentence structure for clarity and correctness.

× What is it all about?

✓ What is it about?

The phrase 'all' is unnecessary here and makes the sentence awkward. Removing 'all' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Because I just recently encountered this kind of question.

✓ I just recently encountered this kind of question.

Starting a sentence with 'Because' without completing the thought creates a sentence fragment. Removing 'Because' makes it a complete sentence.

× Can you tell me what's the answer?

✓ Can you tell me what the answer is?

The indirect question structure requires 'what the answer is' rather than 'what's the answer' to be grammatically correct.

× Usually the things that make me feel impatient, like I'm in a rush or in a hurry and I would like to know the important details like for example when I am in a meeting, it makes me.

✓ Usually, things that make me feel impatient are when I'm in a rush or in a hurry, and I want to know important details; for example, when I am in a meeting, it makes me impatient.

The original sentence is a run-on and incomplete. The correction breaks it into clearer parts and completes the thought for better understanding.

× especially if the things that I'm doing is not my interest.

✓ especially if the things that I'm doing are not my interest.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× Like for example when I am tasked to cook and I can.

✓ For example, when I am tasked to cook, I can do it.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× It is because most of all the times I should be keen to details as well as solve problems and reconciling items and doing the accounting entries and accounting reports.

✓ It is because most of the time I should be keen to details, as well as solve problems, reconcile items, and do accounting entries and reports.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and inconsistent verb forms. The correction improves clarity and uses parallel verb forms.

× Yes, I can consider myself as patient now than when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I consider myself more patient now than when I was a child.

The phrase 'can consider myself as patient now than' is incorrect. The correction uses the comparative form 'more patient' and correct verb usage.

× I could say that I have a wisdom to understand things and be patient.

✓ I could say that I have the wisdom to understand things and be patient.

'Wisdom' is an uncountable noun and should not have the article 'a'. Using 'the wisdom' is correct here.