Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，影响了表达的流畅性。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意时态和语法的正确使用。可以用更自然的表达方式来说明你是一个耐心的人，并且简洁地说明例外情况。

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because it helps me stay calm and handle situations better. However, when I have urgent tasks, I tend to be less patient.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的句子结构，并且具体说明让你感到不耐烦的原因，避免模糊表达。

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I have urgent matters to deal with or face difficult problems. Also, conflicts with friends can make me lose patience.

Sugestão: 回答中有很多犹豫词和重复，影响流畅度。建议减少填充词，使用连贯的句子，并且注意语法和词汇的准确性。可以具体描述不同活动带来的感受。

Exemplo: It depends on the activity. If I have to do something like reading for a long time, I usually get bored and tired. But watching TV for a long time doesn't make me bored.

Sugestão: 回答内容较为完整，但语法和表达有些混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和单复数形式，并且更清晰地表达观点。

Exemplo: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I teach classes with up to 14 students, each having different opinions.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议完整表达观点，使用正确的时态，并且避免重复。可以举具体例子说明耐心的变化。

Exemplo: I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. For example, I used to get bored practicing piano every day, but now I can focus better.

× Most of the time I was.

✓ Most of the time I am.

这里谈论的是现在的性格特点，应该使用现在时态，而不是过去时态。

× because I believe being patient can help me to can help me calm down and do things better and have a better relationship with others.

✓ because I believe being patient can help me calm down, do things better, and have a better relationship with others.

句中重复使用了“can help me”，造成冗余，应去掉重复部分，并用逗号分隔并列动词。

× But sometimes if I have something important or very urgent to do, I will.

✓ But sometimes if I have something important or very urgent to do, I will be less patient.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，导致表达不清，应补充完整。

× I will be less patient because.

✓ I will be less patient because of that.

句子不完整，缺少原因部分，导致表达不清，应补充完整。

× I'll say that always be something very urgent for me or something I may find it difficult to tackle this or something that makes me feel unhappy.

✓ I'll say that there is always something very urgent for me, or something I may find difficult to tackle, or something that makes me feel unhappy.

句子缺少主语和谓语，且连接词使用不当，应调整句子结构使其完整。

× something I may find it difficult to tackle this

✓ something I may find difficult to tackle

“this”与前面的“something”重复，造成冗余，应去掉“this”。

× like when you are have some conflicts with your friends that at that time I may be not that patient.

✓ like when you have some conflicts with your friends; at that time, I may not be that patient.

“are have”是错误的动词形式，应改为“have”；句子结构混乱，应分号分隔并调整语序。

× if I'm doing an exercise for, uh, like out reading, uh, it probably bored me and I, I, I will feel very tired and stressful.

✓ if I'm doing an exercise like reading out loud, it probably bores me and I will feel very tired and stressed.

“for”用法错误，应去掉；“bored”应为第三人称单数“bores”；“stressful”形容事物，形容人应用“stressed”。

× But if I'm watching the TV, I will never get bored about get bored of it and I.

✓ But if I'm watching TV, I will never get bored of it.

“the TV”中“the”不需要；“get bored about”错误，应为“get bored of”；句子未完成，应删去多余部分。

× because my job need to teach a lot of students in one class and there were likely and there is likely to have up to 14 students in one class.

✓ because my job needs to teach a lot of students in one class and there are likely to be up to 14 students in one class.

“job”是单数，谓语动词应加-s；“there were likely”时态和结构错误，应改为“there are likely to be”。

× You need to be very patient and because all these people, all these students have different opinions.

✓ You need to be very patient because all these people, all these students, have different opinions.

“and because”连接词使用错误，应去掉“and”使句子通顺。

× Well, I would say for sure when I was a child, I always got bored and I always lose my patience on things, on something.

✓ Well, I would say for sure when I was a child, I always got bored and I always lost my patience with things.

前半句是过去时，后半句“lose”应改为过去时“lost”；“lose my patience on”搭配错误，应为“lose my patience with”。

× I always lose my patience on things, on something.

✓ I always lose my patience with things.

“lose patience”后应接介词“with”，而非“on”。

× For example, at that time I learned piano and I need to practice, practice it every day.

✓ For example, at that time I was learning piano and I needed to practice it every day.

描述过去的动作，应使用过去进行时或过去时态；“need”应改为过去时“needed”。

× But at that time I, you know.

✓ But at that time, I, you know, was not very patient.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和补充说明，导致表达不清，应补充完整。