Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit repetitive and unclear. Try to give a direct response first, then explain with clear reasons using linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea and focus on natural English expressions.

Exemplo: No, I am not a very patient person. For example, when I have to wait for someone, I often feel frustrated because I dislike wasting time. However, my patience depends on the situation; sometimes I can stay calm if the reason is important.

Sugestão: Your answer is quite long and a bit confusing. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Use simpler and clearer vocabulary to express your feelings.

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I face difficult problems, especially in my studies. For instance, when I cannot understand a math question, I get frustrated because it takes longer to solve. This makes me feel impatient and stressed.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to answer directly and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Avoid unnecessary phrases and focus on expressing your feelings clearly.

Exemplo: When I do something for a long time, like drawing, it helps me remember past experiences. For example, drawing a flower reminds me of the time I first learned to draw. This makes the activity enjoyable and meaningful.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using better linking words and clearer sentence structure. Try to avoid vague phrases and explain your ideas more specifically.

Exemplo: Yes, my job requires me to be patient and control my emotions. For instance, when I feel frustrated, I try to stay calm so that I can work effectively and avoid mistakes.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use simple and correct grammar to express your ideas.

Exemplo: I am more patient now than when I was a child. As a kid, I did not understand how to control my emotions, but now I have learned to manage my feelings, which helps me stay positive in daily life. Although I still get frustrated sometimes, I try to be patient.

× No, I'm not a patient, very patient.

✓ No, I'm not patient, very patient.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the adjective 'patient'. 'Patient' is an adjective here and does not require an article. The correct form is 'I'm not patient'.

× But whenever I was waiting for someone I often get frustrated.

✓ But whenever I wait for someone I often get frustrated.

The sentence mixes past tense 'was waiting' with present tense 'get'. To express habitual action, present simple tense 'wait' should be used consistently.

× Frustration.

✓ I feel frustration.

The word 'Frustration' alone is a noun and does not form a complete sentence. It should be used with a verb to express feeling, e.g., 'I feel frustration.'

× When I'm feeling so bad, then I feel so frustrated.

✓ When I feel so bad, then I feel so frustrated.

The present continuous 'I'm feeling' is less appropriate here; the simple present 'I feel' is better to express general feelings.

× Sometimes it depends upon the situation, my situation, how I can get frustrated.

✓ Sometimes it depends on the situation, my situation, and how I get frustrated.

The phrase 'depends upon' is less common; 'depends on' is preferred. Also, 'how I can get frustrated' is awkward; 'how I get frustrated' is clearer and more natural.

× Whenever I feel puzzled in my problems in my daily life problems I got frustrated for some solving some problem or doing questions not to understand properly in my study studies mathematics, it gave me feel like I'm feeling impatient.

✓ Whenever I feel puzzled by problems in my daily life, I get frustrated when solving some problems or doing questions that I do not understand properly in my mathematics studies; it makes me feel impatient.

Incorrect prepositions 'puzzled in' should be 'puzzled by'. 'Got frustrated' should be 'get frustrated' to maintain present tense. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Whenever I do something for a long time, especially drawing, it reflects my memories back that at that at that time of period I had done my this thing drawing and draw this flower.

✓ Whenever I do something for a long time, especially drawing, it reflects my memories back to the time when I did this drawing and drew this flower.

The past perfect 'had done' is unnecessary; simple past 'did' is appropriate. 'Draw' should be past tense 'drew'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× It is a lack of memorizing and I regenerate my memories again by doing for a long time.

✓ It is a lack of memory, and I regenerate my memories again by doing it for a long time.

'Lack of memorizing' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'lack of memory'. Added 'it' for clarity.

× Well, when we're doing the job, it is necessary to be patient and controlled on our emotions.

✓ Well, when we're doing the job, it is necessary to be patient and control our emotions.

'Controlled on' is incorrect; the correct form is 'control our emotions'. The modal verb 'to be' is used correctly but the verb following should be in base form.

× And I think that I have whenever I feel frustrated.

✓ And I think that I have it whenever I feel frustrated.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'it' clarifies the object of 'have'.

× But I need to control my frustration while I'm doing my job.

✓ But I need to control my frustration while I am doing my job.

Contraction 'I'm' is acceptable but for formal clarity, 'I am' is better. No major preposition error here; sentence is acceptable.

× When I was child I didn't know about what is the patient and what is that I never, I never control my patient when I was a kid but now I but now they I know how to control the emotions which help give me the positive attitude in my daily life.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't know what patience is, and I never controlled my patience when I was a kid, but now I know how to control my emotions which help give me a positive attitude in my daily life.

'When I was child' should be 'When I was a child'. 'Patient' is incorrectly used instead of 'patience'. 'Control' should be past tense 'controlled' to match past time. Sentence restructured for clarity.

× Probably I got frustrated but now I need to be.

✓ I probably get frustrated, but now I need to be patient.

'Got frustrated' is past tense; 'get frustrated' fits better with present context. The sentence is incomplete; 'be' should be followed by 'patient' to complete the meaning.