Part 1
Examinador
Are you a patient person?
Candidato
Well, it depends you know, when I met traffic jam and some small problems, I maybe go wild and I can't stand with just standing or sitting here for a long. Because I thought my time should be spent on some valuable things.
Examinador
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Candidato
For example, waiting in a long break for public transportation. I've been quite frustrated because it waste my time and disrupt my plans.
Examinador
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Candidato
Well, if I have to do something for a long time, I may be very impatient if the sex is not so important or less related to my own work, but. If the same thing is very important and I need to finish it as soon as possible, I maybe feel yeah, it's.
Examinador
Does your job require you to be patient?
Candidato
Yes, definitely. You know, I'm a master in robotic engineering, so I will try to do more experiment. Best planning and budget recognition that need more time to test the programming and correct the bugs.
Examinador
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, of course. You know, when I was a kid, I used to want to buy some toys just immediately. I can't wait for several minutes. But for now, you know, when I entered the college, I tried to get touch in different tasks.
Are you a patient person?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不清,建议使用更自然流畅的句子结构,并且避免重复表达。可以简洁明了地说明自己在什么情况下不耐烦,并给出具体原因。
Exemplo: I am usually patient, but I get impatient when I am stuck in traffic jams or have to wait for a long time doing nothing, because I feel my time could be better spent on more valuable activities.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答时应注意语法准确性,如时态和单复数,同时可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。建议详细说明为什么等待公共交通让你感到不耐烦。
Exemplo: For example, I feel impatient when I have to wait a long time for public transportation because it wastes my time and disrupts my daily plans.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法和表达不清的问题,建议理清思路,使用完整句子表达观点,并且避免使用模糊或不相关的词汇。可以明确区分不同情况下的耐心程度。
Exemplo: If I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel impatient when the task is unimportant or unrelated to my work. However, if the task is important, I try to stay patient and complete it as soon as possible.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中应注意语法和词汇的准确使用,避免拼写错误和不连贯的表达。建议用更清晰的句子描述工作中需要耐心的具体方面。
Exemplo: Yes, definitely. As a robotic engineer, I need to be patient because experiments and testing programs take a lot of time, and I have to carefully find and fix bugs.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中应避免语法错误和不自然的表达,建议使用更准确的词汇和句式来描述耐心的变化过程。
Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. When I was young, I couldn't wait even a few minutes to buy toys, but now, especially since entering college, I have learned to be more patient with different tasks.
× when I met traffic jam and some small problems, I maybe go wild and I can't stand with just standing or sitting here for a long.
✓ when I meet traffic jams and some small problems, I may go wild and I can't stand just standing or sitting here for a long time.
这里“traffic jam”应使用复数形式“traffic jams”,因为交通堵塞通常是可数的多个事件。此外,“maybe”应改为“may be”或直接用“may”,表示可能性。句中“for a long”缺少“time”,应补充完整。
× I maybe go wild and I can't stand with just standing or sitting here for a long.
✓ I may go wild and I can't stand just standing or sitting here for a long time.
“maybe”是副词,表示“也许”,而此处应使用情态动词“may”表示可能性。
× I can't stand with just standing or sitting here for a long.
✓ I can't stand just standing or sitting here for a long time.
动词短语“can't stand”后不需要介词“with”,应直接跟动名词。
× waiting in a long break for public transportation.
✓ waiting in a long queue for public transportation.
“break”意为休息,不符合语境,应改为“queue”(排队)表示等待。
× I've been quite frustrated because it waste my time and disrupt my plans.
✓ I've been quite frustrated because it wastes my time and disrupts my plans.
主语“it”是第三人称单数,谓语动词应加-s,变为“wastes”和“disrupts”。
× I may be very impatient if the sex is not so important or less related to my own work, but.
✓ I may be very impatient if the task is not so important or less related to my own work, but.
“sex”应为“task”,语义错误。
× If the same thing is very important and I need to finish it as soon as possible, I maybe feel yeah, it's.
✓ If the same thing is very important and I need to finish it as soon as possible, I may feel that way.
“maybe”应为情态动词“may”,且句子不完整,需补充完整表达。
× I'm a master in robotic engineering, so I will try to do more experiment.
✓ I'm a master in robotic engineering, so I will try to do more experiments.
“experiment”应使用复数形式“experiments”,表示多个实验。
× Best planning and budget recognition that need more time to test the programming and correct the bugs.
✓ Better planning and budget recognition that need more time to test the programming and correct the bugs.
“Best”用法不当,应为比较级“better”更符合语境。
× when I entered the college, I tried to get touch in different tasks.
✓ when I entered college, I tried to get in touch with different tasks.
“get touch in”用法错误,应为“get in touch with”,表示接触、了解。