Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达有些重复和不自然，建议简化句子结构，避免重复使用"I'm willing to"，并且注意用词准确。可以多用一些具体例子来支持观点。

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I always listen carefully to others and try to understand their feelings. For example, when someone is upset, I remain calm and offer support.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达不清，最后一句话未说完。建议回答时完整表达观点，避免语法错误，并且用更具体的例子说明。

Exemplo: I feel impatient when people speak loudly in public because it disturbs others. Also, I sometimes get impatient with children when they are noisy or don't listen.

Sugestão: 表达较好，但有语法错误和用词不当，如"pretty like"应为"quite like"，"challengeable"不常用。建议使用更自然的表达，并注意语法。

Exemplo: I quite enjoy working on long-term projects because they give me time to solve problems carefully. It can be challenging, but completing them gives me a great sense of achievement.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如"be and communicate"。建议简化句子，避免重复，并且用更流畅的表达。

Exemplo: Yes, my job as a lawyer requires a lot of patience because I need to carefully review legal documents and communicate calmly with clients.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且有语法错误，如"have patients to"。建议完整表达观点，注意时态一致，并避免重复。

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now. As a child, I often got impatient doing homework, but now I can patiently handle long and complex documents at work.

× I think I'm pretty patient and I'm always less aggressive to anyone else.

✓ I think I'm pretty patient and I'm always less aggressive towards anyone else.

这里介词使用错误，应该用'towards'表示对待某人，'to'不合适。

× I'm willing to listen to others words and I'm willing to think about others feelings.

✓ I'm willing to listen to others' words and I'm willing to think about others' feelings.

这里缺少所有格，'others'应为'others''表示别人的，需加撇号。

× If sometimes the people are yelling at me or speak really loudly in the publics places, I will feel impatient because I think it's rude and impolite.

✓ If sometimes people are yelling at me or speaking really loudly in public places, I will feel impatient because I think it's rude and impolite.

'publics places'错误，正确应为'public places'，'public'作形容词修饰复数名词时不加复数形式。

× If sometimes the people are yelling at me or speak really loudly in the publics places, I will feel impatient because I think it's rude and impolite.

✓ If sometimes people are yelling at me or speaking really loudly in public places, I will feel impatient because I think it's rude and impolite.

并列动词时应保持形式一致，'are yelling'后面应接' speaking'而非'speak'。

× Also I will feel impatient when I meet children, especially when they are not.

✓ Also I will feel impatient when I meet children, especially when they are not patient.

句子不完整，'especially when they are not'后缺少形容词，导致句意不明。

× Well, I would pretty like to do the project and the things that will cost a long time because I will have enough time to figure out the problems and to address them.

✓ Well, I would pretty much like to do the project and the things that will take a long time because I will have enough time to figure out the problems and to address them.

'pretty like'搭配错误，应为'pretty much like'或'pretty much want to'，且'cost a long time'应改为'take a long time'。

× It's pretty challengeable for me and if I can figure out I will have a great sense of achievement.

✓ It's pretty challenging for me and if I can figure it out I will have a great sense of achievement.

'challengeable'不是常用词，应使用形容词'challenging'，且'figure out'后应有宾语。

× Oh yes, because I work as a lawyer and the during my work time I should be very patient to handle the legal documents and be and communicate with my clients patiently.

✓ Oh yes, because I work as a lawyer and during my work time I should be very patient in handling the legal documents and communicating with my clients patiently.

'the during'错误，'during'前不加冠词；'patient to handle'应改为'patient in handling'，动名词形式更合适。

× ...and be and communicate with my clients patiently.

✓ ...and communicate with my clients patiently.

句中多余的'be and'应删除，保持句子简洁通顺。

× Yes, I think so because when I was a child I often feel impatient when I do my homework and school assignment, but now I have much more patience to handle the long and complex document and have patients to.

✓ Yes, I think so because when I was a child I often felt impatient when I did my homework and school assignments, but now I have much more patience to handle long and complex documents and have patience too.

时态错误，过去时应用'felt'和'did'；'school assignment'应为复数'school assignments'；'patients'拼写错误，应为'patience'；句尾'and have patients to'不完整，改为'and have patience too'。