Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be made more natural and clear. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I try to stay calm in stressful situations. Moreover, I often help my family members to remain patient during difficult times.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but needs clearer structure and grammar. Use linking words like 'when' and 'because' to explain reasons. Also, try to be concise and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I work hard towards a goal but fail to achieve it. At such times, I also lose motivation to start new tasks because of the disappointment.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct tenses and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words like 'at first' and 'then' to show sequence.

Exemplo: When I start a task that takes a long time, I feel stressed at first. However, once I begin working, I become focused and immersed in it.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Use simpler and clearer language. Also, explain why patience is needed using linking words like 'because'.

Exemplo: Yes, my job as a writer requires a lot of patience because I need to spend time creating good content that people will like.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically. Use linking words like 'although' and 'because' to explain your thoughts.

Exemplo: Actually, I was more patient as a child. However, because I have faced many difficult situations and struggles, I have become less patient over time.

× Yes, I'm a patient person as I always try to stay calm in the situation which are fairly with stressed involvement and I usually help my family members as well to stay patient in their life.

✓ Yes, I'm a patient person as I always try to stay calm in situations which are fairly stressful and I usually help my family members as well to stay patient in their lives.

The subject 'situation' is singular but followed by 'are' which is plural, causing a subject-verb agreement error. Also, 'stressed involvement' is incorrect; 'stressful' is the correct adjective. 'Life' should be plural 'lives' when referring to multiple family members. To improve, ensure subject and verb agree in number and use correct adjective forms.

× Whenever I'm struggling in a situation, I have really worked hard for that result to get achieved, but I didn't get and that time I feel really impatient and I also feel like I'm not motivated enough to do another task.

✓ Whenever I'm struggling in a situation, I have really worked hard for that result to be achieved, but I didn't get it and at that time I feel really impatient and I also feel like I'm not motivated enough to do another task.

The phrase 'to get achieved' is incorrect; the passive infinitive 'to be achieved' is appropriate. Also, 'didn't get' is incomplete without an object; adding 'it' clarifies the meaning. The tense usage is mixed but acceptable as the student refers to past efforts and present feelings. To improve, use correct passive forms and complete sentences with necessary objects.

× Than ever I started the task which takes long time to complete it.

✓ Whenever I start a task that takes a long time to complete,

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing articles. 'Than ever' is incorrect; 'Whenever' fits the context. 'Takes long time' needs the article 'a' before 'long time'. Also, 'to complete it' is redundant after 'takes a long time to complete'. To improve, use correct conjunctions and article placement, and simplify sentence structure.

× I definitely feel stressed in the first but when I started that work I lost in that word by staying focused.

✓ I definitely feel stressed at first, but when I start that work, I get lost in it by staying focused.

'In the first' should be 'at first' to indicate initial feeling. 'Started' should be 'start' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Lost in that word' is incorrect; likely meant 'lost in that work' or 'lost in it'. 'Lost in it by staying focused' means becoming absorbed. To improve, use correct prepositions, maintain tense consistency, and clarify expressions.

× Yes, as I am a writer and I always have to stay in a comp situation to write something great, which is like by everyone.

✓ Yes, as I am a writer and I always have to stay in a competitive situation to write something great, which is liked by everyone.

'Comp situation' is unclear; likely 'competitive situation'. 'Like by everyone' should be 'liked by everyone' to use correct passive form. To improve, avoid abbreviations and use correct passive voice with past participle.

× Not actually I'm losing my patience level from the childhood as I was more patient in my childhood but not yet because I have seen many situation as and has struggled through lot which has switched has made me more impatient.

✓ Not actually, I've been losing my patience since childhood as I was more patient in my childhood but not anymore because I have seen many situations and have struggled a lot which has made me more impatient.

'From the childhood' should be 'since childhood'. 'Many situation' should be 'many situations' to match plural form. 'Has struggled through lot' should be 'have struggled a lot'. 'Switched has made me' is incorrect and redundant; 'has made me' suffices. To improve, use correct prepositions, plural forms, and verb agreement.