Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear, concise response directly addressing the question, and avoid incomplete sentences. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas naturally.

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I usually stay calm even in difficult situations.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but lacks fluency and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Exemplo: The thing that makes me feel impatient is when people are late, whether it's for work, meetings, or appointments. I believe that managing time well is essential for success in any career.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but somewhat repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Use linking words to contrast your feelings and provide clear, specific examples.

Exemplo: It depends on the activity. For example, I enjoy doing household chores like cooking for a long time because it relaxes me. However, if I have to wait or do something boring for a long time, I get frustrated.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but is fragmented and unclear. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain why patience is important in your job.

Exemplo: Yes, my job in the food industry requires a lot of patience because I interact with around 100 to 200 people every day, so staying calm and patient is essential.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use clear sentence structures and linking words to explain the change in your patience over time.

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I used to be very impatient and had anger issues, but practicing yoga and meditation has helped me gain more patience and experience.

× I always stay calm and be patience even.

✓ I always stay calm and am patient even.

The word 'patience' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe the subject. 'Patient' is the correct adjective form to use after 'be'. Also, 'be patience' is incorrect; it should be 'am patient' to agree with the subject 'I'.

× It is on. But situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correct structure is 'It depends on the situation' to express the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× Only thing that make me impatience.

✓ The only thing that makes me impatient.

'Thing' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' (third person singular). Also, 'impatience' is a noun, but an adjective 'impatient' is needed here to describe the feeling.

× Only thing that make me impatience.

✓ The only thing that makes me impatient.

As above, 'impatience' is a noun; the adjective 'impatient' is required to describe the feeling caused by the thing.

× To reach late.

✓ Being late.

The phrase 'to reach late' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'being late' to describe the state of arriving late.

× Even it is a work, even it is a meeting, here is appointment.

✓ Whether it is work, a meeting, or an appointment.

The phrase 'even it is' is incorrect. The correct conjunction to introduce alternatives is 'whether'. Also, 'here is appointment' is incorrect; it should be 'an appointment'.

× If you can't manage your time, you can't manage your whole career.

✓ If you can't manage your time, you can't manage your whole career.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Actually it depends on the thing.

✓ Actually, it depends on the thing.

A comma is needed after 'Actually' to separate the introductory word from the main clause.

× If I'm doing household chores is for a long time, I feel more happy because that is a part of my life.

✓ If I'm doing household chores for a long time, I feel happier because that is a part of my life.

The phrase 'is for a long time' is incorrect; it should be 'for a long time'. Also, 'more happy' should be 'happier' as the comparative form of 'happy'.

× Like if I'm cooking, cooking, it is a good thing if I'm doing it a long time.

✓ For example, if I'm cooking, it is a good thing if I do it for a long time.

Repetition of 'cooking' is unnecessary. 'Doing it a long time' is incorrect; it should be 'do it for a long time'.

× But if I'm doing something boring thing and I have to wait for a long time.

✓ But if I'm doing something boring and have to wait for a long time,

'Something boring thing' is redundant; 'something boring' suffices. Also, the sentence is incomplete and should be connected to the next clause.

× The things frustrate me a lot, like.

✓ These things frustrate me a lot.

'The things' should be 'These things' to refer to previously mentioned items. The word 'like' at the end is incomplete and unnecessary.

× Yes, my job, the most important thing in my jobs to be have a patience because I'm doing the job in a food industry.

✓ Yes, my job requires me to have patience because I work in the food industry.

'The most important thing in my jobs to be have a patience' is incorrect. The sentence should clearly state the requirement of patience. Also, 'a food industry' should be 'the food industry'.

× Where I attend. Around 100 or 200 people every day.

✓ Where I attend to around 100 or 200 people every day.

The verb 'attend' is incomplete without an object or preposition. It should be 'I attend to around 100 or 200 people every day.'

× And so having a patience. Give me.

✓ So having patience helps me.

'Having a patience' is incorrect; 'patience' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. The phrase 'Give me' is incomplete and unclear.

× I can see yes I'm I have more patience now rather than in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I can see that I have more patience now than I did in my childhood.

The original sentence has redundant pronouns and incorrect comparative structure. 'Rather than' should be 'than' for comparison, and past tense 'did' is needed for 'childhood'.

× In my childhood I am very impatient.

✓ In my childhood, I was very impatient.

When referring to past time ('childhood'), the past tense 'was' should be used instead of 'am'.

× I have too much anger issue.

✓ I had too many anger issues.

'Issue' should be plural 'issues' to match 'too many'. Also, past tense 'had' is appropriate when referring to childhood.

× But now I'm doing yoga and meditation and now I have so much experience.

✓ But now, I do yoga and meditation, and I have gained a lot of experience.

'I'm doing' suggests current continuous action; 'I do' is more appropriate for habitual actions. Also, 'so much experience' is better expressed as 'a lot of experience' or 'gained experience'.

× So I am can say I'm more and more patients in my life now.

✓ So I can say I'm more and more patient in my life now.

'I am can say' is incorrect; it should be 'I can say'. 'Patients' is a noun; the adjective 'patient' is needed here.