Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more coherent and natural by avoiding unclear phrases like 'Come, Leanne.' Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your sentences concise and relevant.

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For example, when the teacher gave us a project, I stayed organized and completed it step by step without rushing or acting impulsively.

Sugestão: Focus on clear and relevant details. Avoid confusing phrases like 'impression has to be limited.' Use linking words to explain your feelings logically and keep your sentences grammatically correct.

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I wait for my exam results or when the Internet connection is slow. For instance, after the teacher announced that results would come in three days, I found it hard to concentrate on my studies during that time.

Sugestão: Improve clarity by using correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Explain your feelings with specific examples and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I usually feel tired and sometimes lose motivation when I have to work on something for a long time. For example, when I have to study and research a presentation, my concentration decreases over time.

Sugestão: Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Provide specific examples and use linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

Exemplo: Yes, my job definitely requires me to be patient. For example, as a doctor, I need to concentrate on my patients and treat them carefully step by step to avoid mistakes.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer by correcting grammar and simplifying complex phrases like 'creative ability correctly.' Use linking words to compare past and present effectively.

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. As a child, I wanted quick results, but now I take things step by step, staying calm and organized to avoid mistakes.

× when the teacher released a presentation for us

✓ when the teacher released a presentation for us

The verb 'released' is correctly used in the past tense here, so no correction is needed.

× Come, Leanne. Stay organized to achieve that.

✓ Come on, Leanne. Stay organized to achieve that.

The phrase 'Come, Leanne' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'on' after 'Come' makes it a common expression encouraging someone to proceed or focus.

× I tried to do it step by step without impulsively, especially without rushing.

✓ I tried to do it step by step without being impulsive, especially without rushing.

The adverb 'impulsively' is incorrectly used here. The correct form is the adjective 'impulsive' after 'without being' to describe the manner of action.

× waiting for the results of my studying or waiting for the Internet connection

✓ waiting for the results of my studies or waiting for the Internet connection

The noun 'studying' should be replaced with 'studies' to correctly refer to the results of academic work.

× when the teacher declared that our result is positive

✓ when the teacher declared that our results are positive

The word 'result' should be plural 'results' to agree with 'our', and the verb 'is' should be 'are' to match the plural subject.

× In the next three day so I can wait to see my result an I cannot concentrate on my study.

✓ In the next three days, I have to wait to see my results and I cannot concentrate on my studies.

The phrase 'three day' should be plural 'three days'. Also, 'so I can wait' is better expressed as 'I have to wait' to indicate future obligation. 'Result' and 'study' should be plural to match context.

× Additionally, I think impression has to be limited.

✓ Additionally, I think impatience has to be limited.

The word 'impression' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is likely 'impatience'.

× I usually feel quite tired and sometime have a bit more when I have to do something for a long time.

✓ I usually feel quite tired and sometimes have a bit more fatigue when I have to do something for a long time.

The adverb 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Also, 'have a bit more' is incomplete; adding 'fatigue' clarifies the meaning.

× when the teacher released the presentation for student

✓ when the teacher released the presentation for students

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context.

× my concentration have been dropped down and start to lose motivation.

✓ my concentration has dropped and I have started to lose motivation.

The singular subject 'concentration' requires the singular verb 'has'. Also, 'start' should be 'have started' to agree with the subject 'I'.

× my job is definitely required me to be patient.

✓ my job definitely requires me to be patient.

The phrase 'is required me' is incorrect. The correct form is 'requires me' to express necessity.

× I am currently work as a doctor so I need to pay concentration to my patient and stay organized with them.

✓ I am currently working as a doctor, so I need to pay attention to my patients and stay organized with them.

The verb 'work' should be in the present participle form 'working' after 'am'. 'Pay concentration' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'pay attention'. 'Patient' should be plural 'patients'.

× I have to cure them step by step and get them some treatment and to avoid mistakes.

✓ I have to treat them step by step and give them some treatment to avoid mistakes.

The verb 'cure' is less appropriate here; 'treat' is better. 'Get them some treatment' is awkward; 'give them some treatment' is correct. 'And to avoid mistakes' should be connected properly.

× I want to do something important, so I have to know the result quickly.

✓ I wanted to do something important, so I had to know the result quickly.

The sentence refers to past time ('as a child'), so verbs should be in past tense to maintain consistency.

× But currently I have to take step by step and stay calm, stay concentrated and stay organized to avoid mistakes and creative ability correctly.

✓ But currently I have to take it step by step and stay calm, stay concentrated, and stay organized to avoid mistakes and use my creative ability correctly.

The phrase 'take step by step' is incomplete; 'take it step by step' is correct. 'Creative ability' needs a verb like 'use' to make sense.