Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构不完整，且有重复和不连贯的问题。建议简化句子，避免语法错误，并且用更自然的表达方式描述自己的感受。

Exemplo: I don't consider myself a patient person because when I am stressed, I often feel exhausted and sometimes get angry with my friends and family. I know this behavior is not good, and I am trying to improve.

Sugestão: 回答表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯的逻辑。建议用简单明了的句子表达原因，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

Exemplo: I often feel impatient because my daily commitments, like work and studies, make me very tired. Therefore, I need to find ways to reduce my stress and become more patient.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和不完整的句子，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达感受，并用连接词连接句子。

Exemplo: I feel overwhelmed when I have to do something for a long time, especially if I don't like it. This makes me more exhausted and impatient, which is not good for me.

Sugestão: 回答语法错误较多，句子不连贯，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连接词说明原因。

Exemplo: Yes, as a university student, my work and studies are often overwhelming. Therefore, I need to be patient to handle conflicts and difficulties in my studies.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题，句子不完整。建议用完整句子表达对比，并用连接词使内容连贯。

Exemplo: I am probably not more patient now than when I was a child because the challenges and stress in my work and studies have increased. When I was a child, I didn't have much stress.

× I don't think I'm a patient person because when I'm stressed.

✓ I don't think I'm a patient person because when I'm stressed,

句子中“because when I'm stressed”是一个时间状语从句，后面应接主句内容，缺少主句导致句子结构不完整。应在从句后加逗号并补充主句，使句子完整。

× I always feel very exhaustible and angry with my loved ones such as my friends and family members.

✓ I always feel very exhausted and angry with my loved ones such as my friends and family members.

“exhaustible”意为“可耗尽的”，用来形容人感到疲惫时应使用“exhausted”，表示“感到疲惫的”。

× I think it is bad for me to do the implied behaviors to my loved ones.

✓ I think it is bad for me to show such behaviors to my loved ones.

“do the implied behaviors”表达不自然，且“implied behaviors”含义不明确。应改为“show such behaviors”更符合表达习惯。

× I think. It may be less stressed from my daily commitments such as works and studies always make me feel very tired in my personal time.

✓ I think I may be less stressed, but my daily commitments such as work and studies always make me feel very tired in my personal time.

原句断句错误，且“works”应为不可数名词“work”。句子应连贯表达两个意思，故调整句子结构。

× such as works and studies always make me feel very tired in my personal time.

✓ such as work and studies always make me feel very tired in my personal time.

“work”作为不可数名词表示工作，不应使用复数形式“works”。

× I think I should search for some measures to leave a my stress to be filled in patience.

✓ I think I should find some ways to relieve my stress and be more patient.

原句表达不清且语法混乱，“leave a my stress to be filled in patience”不符合英语表达习惯，应改为“relieve my stress and be more patient”。

× I will feel overwhelmed when I have to do something for a long time, especially for the things that I didn't like.

✓ I will feel overwhelmed when I have to do something for a long time, especially things that I don't like.

“for the things that I didn't like”时态不一致，应与前文保持现在时态，且“for the things”中“for”多余。

× Which can enhance my exhaust and.

✓ This can increase my exhaustion.

“enhance my exhaust”表达错误，“exhaust”是动词或名词，名词形式应为“exhaustion”，且句子不完整，应改为完整表达。

× My impatient for things to do is bad for me.

✓ My impatience with things to do is bad for me.

“impatient”是形容词，名词形式应为“impatience”，且搭配应为“impatience with”。

× Yes, as a student in the university the works and studies over.

✓ Yes, as a student in the university, the work and studies are overwhelming.

“works”应为不可数名词“work”，且句子缺少谓语动词，应补充完整。

× Always be overwhelming to me, so which inquires me to be patient to handle the conflict and difficulties in my studies, I think issued.

✓ They are always overwhelming to me, so they require me to be patient to handle the conflicts and difficulties in my studies, I think.

原句缺少主语，且“inquires”用词错误，应为“require”，句子结构混乱，需调整使其通顺。

× It may be not be 'cause.

✓ It may not be, because

“may be not be”重复且错误，应为“may not be”，且“'cause”应为“because”的缩写，句子不完整。

× Nowadays, the challenge and stress become more and more obvious for me.

✓ Nowadays, the challenges and stress become more and more obvious to me.

“challenge”应为复数“challenges”，且“obvious for me”应改为“obvious to me”。

× Especially the works and studies leads I don't like.

✓ Especially the work and studies I don't like.

“works”应为不可数名词“work”，且“leads”用法错误，应去掉。

× When I was a child, I think there is no stress.

✓ When I was a child, I think there was no stress.

时态不一致，描述过去时应使用过去时态“was”。