Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use correct grammar and singular/plural forms, and make your answer more natural and concise. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific examples using linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I often help my friends and family solve their problems, which requires a lot of patience. Moreover, I enjoy gardening and fishing, activities that naturally demand a patient attitude.

Sugestão: Focus on using correct sentence structures and vocabulary. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify your ideas with specific examples.

Exemplo: I feel impatient when I have to stand in long queues at the bank or store because it feels like I'm wasting time. Especially when I'm in a hurry, this makes me frustrated. Therefore, I prefer shopping online to save time.

Sugestão: Improve your grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Provide a clear topic sentence followed by specific strategies you use to handle boredom.

Exemplo: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel bored and impatient. To combat this, I listen to music and take short breaks to refresh my mind. For example, if I start feeling bored, I pause my work briefly and then continue with renewed focus.

Sugestão: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clear examples. Avoid repetition and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, my job as an ICU nurse requires a great deal of patience because I need to understand patients' needs and provide quality care. For instance, when a patient complains frequently, I try to understand the underlying reasons to help them better.

Sugestão: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons and effects clearly. Avoid incomplete sentences and provide specific examples to support your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because mindfulness techniques and life experience have helped me control my emotions. For example, I now think about the long-term benefits of being patient before reacting.

× Yes, I can say that they are patience person.

✓ Yes, I can say that I am a patient person.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to themselves, so 'I' should be used. Also, 'patience' is a noun, but the adjective 'patient' is needed to describe a person.

× I can be patient despite stressful situation.

✓ I can be patient despite stressful situations.

The noun 'situation' should be plural 'situations' to match the general context of multiple stressful events.

× More often, my friends and family is asking help to solve their problem.

✓ More often, my friends and family are asking for help to solve their problems.

The subject 'friends and family' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'asking help' is incorrect; it should be 'asking for help'. 'Problem' should be plural to match 'friends and family'.

× Additionally, I love gardening and fishing, which inherently demands patience attitude.

✓ Additionally, I love gardening and fishing, which inherently demand a patient attitude.

The plural subject 'gardening and fishing' requires the plural verb 'demand'. Also, 'patience attitude' is incorrect; it should be 'a patient attitude'.

× What makes me feel impatience when I'm standing long time into the queues?

✓ What makes me feel impatient is when I'm standing a long time in the queues.

The noun 'impatience' should be the adjective 'impatient' to describe the feeling. Also, 'standing long time into the queues' is incorrect; it should be 'standing a long time in the queues'.

× In the bank and in the store it feels that I'm wasting long time and especially if I'm hurry it, I feel impatience about it.

✓ In the bank and in the store, it feels like I'm wasting a long time, and especially if I'm in a hurry, I feel impatient about it.

The phrase 'wasting long time' needs the article 'a' before 'long time'. 'If I'm hurry it' is incorrect; it should be 'if I'm in a hurry'. Also, 'feel impatience' should be 'feel impatient'.

× I rather use the online store to buy you things so that it will save my.

✓ I would rather use the online store to buy things so that it will save me time.

'Buy you things' is incorrect; it should be 'buy things'. 'Save my' is incomplete; it should be 'save me time'.

× So what combat this?

✓ So how do I combat this?

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correct question form is 'How do I combat this?'.

× I tried to listen music and take breaks so that I can refresh my mind and come back.

✓ I try to listen to music and take breaks so that I can refresh my mind and come back.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before 'music'. Also, 'tried' should be 'try' to match the present tense context.

× Is is in a nice attitude?

✓ Is this a good attitude?

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence is a proper question.

× For example, I will take a break if I feel bored already and then will come.

✓ For example, I will take a break if I already feel bored and then come back.

The sentence structure is awkward. 'Feel bored already' should be 'already feel bored'. 'Will come' should be 'come back' for clarity.

× Yes, my job requires me to be patient as I'm working as an ICU nurse, so a lot more patience is necessary to understand the needs of the patients and provide quality care for them.

✓ Yes, my job requires me to be patient as I work as an ICU nurse, so much more patience is necessary to understand the needs of the patients and provide quality care for them.

'I'm working' can be simplified to 'I work' for general statements. 'A lot more patience' is better expressed as 'much more patience'.

× For example, if this patience is always complaining, you need to understand the reason why whatever the if the patient needs.

✓ For example, if this patient is always complaining, you need to understand the reason why and what the patient needs.

'This patience' is incorrect; it should be 'this patient'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected for clarity.

× Yes, I am more patients now than when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child.

'Patients' is plural noun meaning sick people; the adjective 'patient' is needed here to describe the speaker.

× Due to the mindful techniques and experience, it enables me to control my emotions and think in a long run who the benefits about it.

✓ Due to mindful techniques and experience, I am able to control my emotions and think in the long run about the benefits.

'It enables me' is vague; 'I am able' is clearer. 'Think in a long run who the benefits about it' is incorrect; it should be 'think in the long run about the benefits'.

× When I'm having an aside from that one, it in a. Some point.

✓ This sentence is unclear and incomplete, so it cannot be corrected without more context.

The sentence is fragmented and does not convey a clear meaning, so correction is not possible without additional information.