Patience— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够自然，语法和表达存在错误，且内容重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免语法错误。

Exemplo: I am not a very patient person. For example, I find it hard to focus on one task for more than an hour, especially because I often get distracted by my phone and social media.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，缺少清晰的主题句和逻辑连接。建议明确说明原因并使用连词。

Exemplo: I feel impatient because social media provides instant entertainment, which makes me want quick results rather than waiting.

Sugestão: 表达混乱且语法错误严重，句子不连贯。建议使用简单句表达感受，并注意语法正确。

Exemplo: When I have to do something for a long time, I feel frustrated and bored because I am not very patient.

Sugestão: 回答内容不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多。建议直接回答问题并用连贯的句子说明理由。

Exemplo: I am a high school student, so I don't have a job. However, studying requires patience because it takes time and effort to learn new things.

Sugestão: 回答不连贯且语法错误严重，表达不清楚。建议简洁明了地比较现在和过去的耐心程度。

Exemplo: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Before, I would immediately check messages from my friends, but now I can wait and focus on other things.

× I can't spend more than one hour's undoing one seems.

✓ I can't spend more than one hour undoing one scene.

这里's是所有格错误，且'seems'应为'scene'。'undoing'后面应接名词，且one hour后不需要所有格。

× And I often distracted by my cell phones like social media.

✓ And I am often distracted by my cell phone, like social media.

缺少be动词'am'，'cell phones'应为单数形式'cell phone'，因为指的是手机作为一个整体。

× Because show social media can gave me so many funny things instantly and make me feel so relaxed.

✓ Because social media can give me so many funny things instantly and make me feel so relaxed.

'show'多余，应去掉；'gave'时态错误，应为原形动词'give'，因为前面有情态动词'can'。

× I would feel little bit frustrated and bored boring be 'cause I'm not a patient person so that I can do one since for long times.

✓ I would feel a little bit frustrated and bored because I'm not a patient person, so I can't do one thing for a long time.

'little bit'前缺冠词'a'；'bored boring be'结构错误，应为'bored'；'since'应为'thing'；'long times'应为'a long time'。

× I think study in the school is same wins working in the job.

✓ I think studying in school is the same as working in a job.

'study'应改为动名词'studying'；'in the school'改为'in school'更自然；'same wins'错误，应为'the same as'；'working in the job'改为'working in a job'。

× I think study need to requires me to be patient.

✓ I think studying needs to require me to be patient.

'study'应为动名词'studying'；'need to requires'结构错误，应为'needs to require'，主语单数，谓语用第三人称单数形式。

× Yes, when I was a child I often distracted by my cell phones when my friends send me the message and I need to immediately check them.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I was often distracted by my cell phone when my friends sent me messages and I needed to immediately check them.

缺少be动词'was'；'cell phones'应为单数形式；'send'时态错误，应为过去式'sent'；'message'应为复数'messages'；'need'时态应为过去式'needed'。

× But no. Well I saw the message, my friend said I will. Wait for a minute.

✓ But no. Well, when I saw the message, my friend said, 'I will wait for a minute.'

句子结构混乱，缺少连词和标点，直接引语未正确使用。应加逗号和引号，使句子通顺。