Snacks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Avoid repetition and fix tense/grammar errors (e.g., "I don't eat much junk food because it's bad for my health"). Use one linking word when adding detail (e.g., "because" or "so").

Exemplo: I usually eat snacks on weekends. Because I’m trying to stay healthy, I don’t eat much junk food and prefer small portions of fruit or nuts.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer and then support it with specific examples. Correct grammar and word order ("There are both healthy and unhealthy snacks" → remove extra words). Use linking words like "however" or "for example" to make the reply coherent.

Exemplo: It depends on the type of snack. For example, I usually choose dried fruits or small salads because they provide nutrients and keep me full longer.

Sugestão: Provide a clear past-tense statement and one specific comparison to now. Fix tense and vocabulary errors ("I preferred"; "it made me happy"). Avoid vague phrases like "internal happiness" and incomplete endings. Use a linking word such as "but" to contrast past and present.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to eat snacks a lot when I was young. For example, I preferred chocolate, burgers and pizza, but now I eat much less because I want to be healthier.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct grammar and be specific about why you like them. Use linking words such as "because" and avoid filler words ("uh"). Distinguish between fried and baked chips and explain briefly why you choose one over the other.

Exemplo: I tend to eat chips, especially baked potato chips, because they taste good and are slightly healthier than fried ones. I prefer small portions so they don’t upset my stomach.

× Well I usually eat quick foods on weekends.

✓ Well, I usually eat quick foods on weekends.

Missing comma after introductory 'Well' is punctuation but does not match list; however sentence otherwise correct in present tense. Suggest using a comma after introductory words for clarity. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× However I'm not eat too much as junk food is not good for our health.

✓ However, I do not eat too much junk food because it is not good for our health.

Incorrect verb form after auxiliary omission: in present simple negative you need 'do not' + base verb. Also 'as' is better replaced with 'because' for reason. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× The more consumption is is a bad for our body.

✓ Excessive consumption is bad for our bodies.

Awkward phrasing: 'The more consumption' is incorrect; use 'excessive consumption' or 'too much consumption'. Also remove extra 'is' and use plural 'bodies' for general statement. (Grammar problem type ID: 13)

× Well, it depends on the snacks. There are both healthy and unhealthy snacks are there, but I mostly prefer to eat the healthy snacks such as the dry fruits and also sometimes the quick salads.

✓ Well, it depends on the snacks. There are both healthy and unhealthy snacks, but I mostly prefer healthy snacks such as dried fruits and sometimes quick salads.

Redundant 'there' and duplicated 'are': use 'There are both healthy and unhealthy snacks' without the extra 'are there'. 'Dry fruits' should be 'dried fruits'. Simplify 'prefer to eat the healthy snacks' to 'prefer healthy snacks'. (Grammar problem type ID: 3)

× Definitely, definitely. I mostly prefer to eat the chocolates and more burger, pizza and different types of snacks varieties and it gave me an internal happiness with mouthwatering.

✓ Definitely. I mostly preferred to eat chocolates, burgers, pizza and various other snacks, and they gave me an inner happiness and made my mouth water.

When talking about past habits use past tense 'preferred' and plural nouns 'burgers'. 'Different types of snacks varieties' is redundant; use 'various other snacks'. 'Internal happiness' is better 'inner happiness' and 'mouthwatering' needs verbal phrase 'made my mouth water'. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× But nowadays I'm reduces the.

✓ But nowadays I have reduced them.

Incorrect verb form: 'I'm reduces' mixes present continuous with incorrect verb. Use present perfect 'have reduced' to indicate change from past to now. Clarify object 'them' referring to snacks. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× Well, I'm tend to eat the chips and it's a not much unhealthy.

✓ Well, I tend to eat chips and they are not very unhealthy.

Incorrect contraction and verb: 'I'm tend' should be 'I tend'. Use plural 'chips' and plural pronoun 'they'. 'Not much unhealthy' is unnatural; use 'not very unhealthy'. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× Uh, it's a taste very good.

✓ Uh, they taste very good.

'It' should refer to plural 'chips', so use 'they taste'. 'A taste very good' is ungrammatical; use 'taste very good' or 'have a very good taste'. (Grammar problem type ID: 13)

× Basically the potato chips are best and mostly the baked chips that give me also healthy and give me more not much heaviness in my stomach.

✓ Basically, potato chips are the best, and mostly baked chips are healthier and do not make my stomach feel too heavy.

Use plural 'potato chips' without 'the' for general statements, include article 'the best' if comparing. 'Give me also healthy' is incorrect: use 'are healthier'. 'More not much heaviness' is awkward; rephrase to 'do not make my stomach feel too heavy'. (Grammar problem type ID: 1)