Snacks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应避免重复使用相同的句式，如“I am...”，并且可以更自然地表达“snacks can make me feel thrilled”，例如用“snacks make the conversation more enjoyable”。此外，回答可以更简洁，避免冗余。

Exemplo: I usually eat snacks while watching TV or chatting with friends because it makes the experience more enjoyable.

Sugestão: 表达时应注意语法和用词准确，如“snacks have some supplement”不太恰当，应说“snacks contain unhealthy ingredients”。另外，句子结构应更清晰，避免语法错误。

Exemplo: No, I don't think snacks are healthy because they often contain unhealthy ingredients, unlike fruits, vegetables, and meats.

Sugestão: 回答中应注意主谓一致和表达自然，如“it can make me very enjoyable”应改为“it makes me feel happy”。同时，句子可以更流畅，避免重复。

Exemplo: Yes, I often ate snacks like chips and nuts when I was young. Although they weren't very healthy, I enjoyed eating them because they made me feel happy.

Sugestão: 表达应更自然，避免生硬的结构，如“The snacks of which I like the most”应改为“My favorite snack is chips”。另外，注意语法和用词，如“made-up of the potato”应为“made from potatoes”，并且“may let me fat”应改为“may make me gain weight”。

Exemplo: My favorite snack is chips. They are made from potatoes and taste delicious, although they contain oil and sugar, which might cause weight gain. Still, I really enjoy eating them.

× I usually eat snacks when I am watching TV or I am talking with other people.

✓ I usually eat snacks when I watch TV or talk with other people.

这里的动作是习惯性的，应该用一般现在时而不是进行时。进行时表示正在发生的动作，而习惯性动作用一般现在时更合适。

× I think the snacks have some supplement that's not healthy for us.

✓ I think the snacks have some ingredients that aren't healthy for us.

这里's supplement'用法不当，应该用'ingredients'（成分）更合适，且关系代词用that指代复数名词。

× It is unhealthier than the fruit, vegetables and the meats right we eat.

✓ It is less healthy than the fruits, vegetables, and meats we usually eat.

'unhealthier'用法不当，应该用'less healthy'表示比较级；'the meats right we eat'结构错误，改为'fruits, vegetables, and meats we usually eat'更自然。

× Although it's unhealthy, I really love to eat it because it can make me very enjoyable.

✓ Although it's unhealthy, I really love eating it because it makes me very happy.

'make me very enjoyable'用法错误，应该用'makes me very happy'；'love to eat'改为'love eating'更自然。

× The snacks of which I like the most is the chips.

✓ The snack I like the most is chips.

'The snacks of which I like the most'结构复杂且不自然，改为'The snack I like the most'更简洁；chips是复数，前面用单数'snack'不匹配。

× It is made-up of the potato and it is very tasty, although it may contain some oil and sugar.

✓ It is made up of potatoes and is very tasty, although it may contain some oil and sugar.

'the potato'应为复数'potatoes'，因为薯片是由多块土豆制成。

× It may let me fat, but that moment I eat is very enjoyable.

✓ It may make me gain weight, but the moment I eat it is very enjoyable.

'let me fat'表达错误，应该用'make me gain weight'；'that moment I eat'缺少主语，改为'the moment I eat it'更完整。