Snacks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to respond directly and clearly, for example, mention specific times or situations when you eat snacks. Also, avoid future tense when asked about current habits. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon, especially when I feel hungry between meals. Sometimes, I have snacks after work to keep my energy up.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and better vocabulary. Avoid vague phrases like 'no energy requirement for that to walk early.' Use linking words to connect ideas and explain reasons more clearly.

Exemplo: From my point of view, eating snacks, especially junk food, is not healthy because they contain a lot of starch and refined flour. These ingredients can weaken the digestive system and reduce energy levels, making it harder to stay active.

Sugestão: Your answer needs better grammar and clearer explanation. Use past tense correctly and provide specific details. Also, explain the effects more clearly and use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was young, I often ate a lot of junk food. Because these snacks contained refined oil and starch, they negatively affected my digestive system and made me feel weaker over time.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and vocabulary. Correct the word 'snakes' to 'snacks' and explain the homemade snacks more clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I like to eat snacks such as potato chips and chocolates, which are junk food. However, sometimes I prefer homemade snacks like roti and papaji jalebi, which satisfy my cravings in a healthier way.

× Usually I'm not eating snacks next week early but yeah I'm eating snacks by sometimes when I need to eat or have craving about it.

✓ Usually I do not eat snacks early next week, but yeah, I sometimes eat snacks when I need to or have a craving for them.

The sentence incorrectly uses the present continuous tense 'I'm not eating' and 'I'm eating' for habitual actions and future time reference 'next week early'. Habitual actions should use the simple present tense. Also, 'have craving about it' is incorrect; it should be 'have a craving for them'. The phrase 'next week early' is unclear and likely incorrect in this context.

× Usually I'm not eating snacks next week early but yeah I'm eating snacks by sometimes when I need to eat or have craving about it.

✓ Usually I do not eat snacks early next week, but yeah, I sometimes eat snacks when I need to or have a craving for them.

The preposition 'by' before 'sometimes' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'sometimes' without 'by'. Also, 'have craving about it' should be 'have a craving for them' to correctly express desire for snacks.

× From my point of view, no, junk food and snacks are not healthy. They contain so much starch, Maida, corn flour that makes body digestive system very weak and no energy requirement for that to walk early.

✓ From my point of view, no, junk food and snacks are not healthy. They contain so much starch, Maida, and corn flour that make the body's digestive system very weak and provide no energy required to walk early.

The verb 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with the plural subject 'starch, Maida, and corn flour' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'body digestive system' should be 'body's digestive system' to show possession. The phrase 'no energy requirement for that to walk early' is awkward and corrected to 'provide no energy required to walk early'.

× Yes, when I am young I eat a lot of stuff like junk food and that makes my digestive system affect because they contain refinery oil, meta starch and they make my body weaker and weaker day by day.

✓ Yes, when I was young I ate a lot of stuff like junk food and that affected my digestive system because they contained refined oil, meta starch, and they made my body weaker and weaker day by day.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense verbs 'am' and 'eat' for past time reference. They should be in past tense 'was' and 'ate'. Also, 'makes my digestive system affect' is incorrect; it should be 'affected my digestive system'. 'Refinery oil' should be 'refined oil'.

× Yes, when I am young I eat a lot of stuff like junk food and that makes my digestive system affect because they contain refinery oil, meta starch and they make my body weaker and weaker day by day.

✓ Yes, when I was young I ate a lot of stuff like junk food and that affected my digestive system because they contained refined oil, meta starch, and they made my body weaker and weaker day by day.

The phrase 'makes my digestive system affect' is incorrect; the verb 'affect' should be used directly as 'affected my digestive system'. Also, 'contain refinery oil' should be 'contained refined oil' for correct past tense and adjective use.

× Snakes like potato chips, chocolates and many more junk food I love to eat but sometimes I eat homemade snacks like roti in Gujarati.

✓ Snacks like potato chips, chocolates, and many more junk foods I love to eat, but sometimes I eat homemade snacks like roti in Gujarati.

The word 'Snakes' is a misspelling of 'Snacks'. Also, 'junk food' should be pluralized to 'junk foods' when referring to multiple types. Commas are added for clarity.

× We said Papa jalebi etc. That makes my cravings super fulfilled.

✓ We say Papa jalebi, etc. Those make my cravings fully satisfied.

The sentence 'We said Papa jalebi etc.' is incorrect in tense and structure; it should be 'We say Papa jalebi, etc.' Also, 'That makes my cravings super fulfilled' is awkward; 'Those make my cravings fully satisfied' is clearer and grammatically correct.