Snacks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and somewhat repetitive. Try to give a direct response with clear reasons and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you eat snacks at those times.

Exemplo: I usually eat snacks when I feel tired or while reading books because they help me stay alert and focused. For instance, a quick snack like nuts or fruit gives me energy without making me feel too full.

Sugestão: Your answer has some good points but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: I believe that healthy snacks can be good for us because they provide essential nutrients and help maintain a balanced diet. For example, snacks low in fat and sugar can support weight management and overall health.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Try to give a clear and relevant response about your snacking habits when you were young, including specific details or examples.

Exemplo: When I was young, I often ate snacks in the afternoon, especially on Saturdays. My parents encouraged me to have healthy snacks like fruits or yogurt during that time.

Sugestão: Your answer mentions your favorite snacks but is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to be more specific and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, explain why you prefer these snacks and mention your efforts to avoid unhealthy options.

Exemplo: I mostly enjoy potato chips and Korean pork chips because of their unique flavors. However, I try to avoid snacks that are high in unhealthy fats to maintain good health.

× I usually take this snack during the time I feel tired or when I read books.

✓ I usually eat this snack when I feel tired or when I read books.

The phrase 'take this snack during the time I feel tired' is awkward and incorrect in English. The verb 'eat' is more appropriate for snacks. Also, 'during the time I feel tired' is unnecessarily wordy; 'when I feel tired' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× So I do give you that any other food than any other things could give.

✓ So I believe this snack gives me more than any other food or things could.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The phrase 'do give you that any other food than any other things could give' is confusing. Rephrasing it to 'I believe this snack gives me more than any other food or things could' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× So I so I since I snack when I am tired of it.

✓ So, I snack when I am tired of it.

The original sentence has redundant words and unclear meaning. Removing the repeated 'so I' and simplifying the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Defence according to different people, different people.

✓ It depends on different people.

The word 'Defence' is incorrect here; likely the intended phrase is 'It depends'. Also, repeating 'different people' is redundant. Correcting to 'It depends on different people' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× I strongly believe that good snacks are obviously beneficial for health as well As for maintaining a complete diet.

✓ I strongly believe that good snacks are obviously beneficial for health as well as for maintaining a complete diet.

The phrase 'as well As' has incorrect capitalization and spacing. Correcting it to 'as well as' fixes the error. The rest of the sentence is correct.

× Snacks which are of less fat than and carbon carbohydrates uses more health and weight loss.

✓ Snacks which have less fat and carbohydrates are healthier and help with weight loss.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and word choice. 'Of less fat than and carbon carbohydrates uses more health and weight loss' is ungrammatical. Correcting to 'have less fat and carbohydrates' and 'are healthier and help with weight loss' makes the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× I believe that they I had Saturdays they eat snacks at the Angels or 12:00 because my parents will encourage me.

✓ I believe that when I was young, I used to eat snacks at around 10 or 12 o'clock because my parents encouraged me.

The original sentence mixes tenses and has unclear phrases like 'they I had Saturdays' and 'at the Angels'. Correcting to past tense 'used to eat' and 'encouraged' fits the context of past habits. Also, clarifying the time to 'around 10 or 12 o'clock' improves clarity.

× So I usually eat it after the age of 30.

✓ So I usually ate them after the age of 30.

Since the question is about past habits, the verb should be in past tense 'ate' instead of 'eat'. Also, 'it' should be plural 'them' referring to snacks.

× I mostly go for, uh, potato chips and uh, leaves and pork Korean chips, uh, which are my favorite snacks.

✓ I mostly go for potato chips and pork Korean chips, which are my favorite snacks.

The word 'leaves' is unclear and likely incorrect in this context. Removing it clarifies the sentence. The rest is correct.

× And I don't go behind any other unhealthy type of snacks which will give me, uh, unhealthy fat and all sort of things which I will avoid in any sort of it.

✓ And I don't eat any other unhealthy types of snacks that would give me unhealthy fat and other things, which I try to avoid.

The phrase 'go behind' is incorrect; 'eat' is appropriate. Also, 'all sort of things which I will avoid in any sort of it' is unclear and ungrammatical. Rephrasing improves clarity and correctness.