Snacks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. For example, instead of repeating 'stay at night', say 'I tend to stay up late, so I sometimes eat snacks in the afternoon or around midnight.'

Exemplo: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon and sometimes around midnight because I tend to stay up late. Therefore, when I feel hungry at night, I prefer to have a small, light snack.

Sugestão: Avoid filler phrases like 'You know' and be more precise in your language. Use linking words to clarify your opinion and provide reasons. For example, say 'In my opinion, eating snacks can be healthy if consumed in moderation and if the snacks are of good quality.'

Exemplo: In my opinion, eating snacks can be healthy if consumed in moderation and if the snacks are of good quality. This means choosing nutritious options and not overeating.

Sugestão: Try to avoid hesitation sounds like 'umm' and filler phrases such as 'You know'. Structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'I often ate snacks when I was young, both at school and at home, because they were my favourite part of the day.'

Exemplo: I often ate snacks when I was young, both at school and at home, because they were my favourite part of the day. Even now, I still enjoy snacks but make sure not to eat too much.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition such as 'I am I am' and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to list your favourite snacks clearly and add a brief reason or opinion. For example, 'Currently, I really enjoy salted butter popcorn because of its rich flavour. I also like mini pretzels and sour gourmet candies, although I know they are not very healthy.'

Exemplo: Currently, I really enjoy salted butter popcorn because of its rich flavour. I also like mini pretzels and sour gourmet candies, although I know they are not very healthy.

× I usually consume snacks around the afternoon and sometimes during midnight because I'm a person who loves to stay stay at night and stay awake at night and so sometimes I become hungry and I would want to have a very small light snacks I would go to.

✓ I usually consume snacks around the afternoon and sometimes during midnight because I'm a person who loves to stay up at night and stay awake at night and so sometimes I become hungry and I would want to have a very small light snack I would go to.

The phrase 'stay stay at night' contains a repetition error and should be 'stay up at night' to correctly express staying awake. Also, 'a very small light snacks' is incorrect because 'snacks' is plural but preceded by 'a' which is singular; it should be 'a very small light snack'. This corrects the singular and plural agreement and the idiomatic expression.

× I usually consume snacks around the afternoon and sometimes during midnight because I'm a person who loves to stay stay at night and stay awake at night and so sometimes I become hungry and I would want to have a very small light snacks I would go to.

✓ I usually consume snacks in the afternoon and sometimes at midnight because I'm a person who loves to stay up at night and stay awake at night and so sometimes I become hungry and I would want to have a very small light snack I would go to.

The prepositions 'around the afternoon' and 'during midnight' are incorrect. The correct prepositions are 'in the afternoon' and 'at midnight' when referring to these times of day.

× I would want to have a very small light snacks I would go to.

✓ I would want to have a very small light snack I would go to.

The word 'snacks' is plural but is preceded by 'a very small light' which requires a singular noun. Changing 'snacks' to 'snack' corrects the singular and plural agreement.

× You know, there has been many opinions about that, whether it is healthy or in a healthy.

✓ You know, there have been many opinions about that, whether it is healthy or unhealthy.

The phrase 'there has been many opinions' is incorrect because 'opinions' is plural and requires 'have' instead of 'has'. Also, 'in a healthy' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'unhealthy' to express the opposite of healthy.

× You know, there has been many opinions about that, whether it is healthy or in a healthy.

✓ You know, there have been many opinions about that, whether it is healthy or unhealthy.

The phrase 'in a healthy' is incorrect; the correct adjective to express the opposite is 'unhealthy'. This corrects the adjective usage.

× Did you often eat snacks when you were young? Student: You know, I grew up with snacks, so during school I would have snacks umm during at home I would have snacks.

✓ Did you often eat snacks when you were young? Student: You know, I grew up with snacks, so during school I would have snacks and at home I would have snacks.

The phrase 'during at home' is incorrect; it should be 'and at home' to connect the two clauses properly. This corrects the sentence structure and preposition usage.

× Like snacks were basically my favorite part of the day and now still I would still consume snacks but in also a good amount.

✓ Like snacks were basically my favorite part of the day and now I still consume snacks but in a good amount.

The phrase 'now still I would still consume' is awkward and redundant. Changing it to 'now I still consume' improves clarity and corrects pronoun and auxiliary verb usage.

× You know, I wouldn't exceed having snacks like.

✓ You know, I wouldn't exceed having snacks.

The phrase 'exceed having snacks like' is incomplete and awkward. Removing 'like' clarifies the sentence and corrects quantifier usage.

× So currently I am I am all in for the salted butter popcorn.

✓ So currently I am all in for the salted butter popcorn.

The repetition of 'I am' is an error. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence structure.

× It has been one of my most absolutely favorite snacks so far as well as I love the mini pretzels, the pretzel sticks, and the sour gourmet candies.

✓ It has been one of my absolute favourite snacks so far, as well as I love the mini pretzels, the pretzel sticks, and the sour gourmet candies.

The phrase 'most absolutely favorite' is redundant and incorrect. 'Absolute favourite' is the correct form. Also, a comma is added after 'so far' for clarity.