Snacks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use singular and plural forms correctly and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'when I am', you can say 'while'.

Exemplo: I usually eat snacks while watching movies. Popcorn is my favourite snack, especially when I binge-watch Korean dramas, because I think it is more nutritious and healthier than other junk foods.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to make it more coherent. Also, avoid repeating 'depends' too often.

Exemplo: Whether eating snacks is healthy depends on the type and quantity. For instance, some people prefer fruits as snacks, which are nutritious, whereas others choose junk foods like potato chips, chocolates, or candies, which are less healthy.

Sugestão: Good answer with relevant details. To improve, try to vary your vocabulary and use linking words to connect ideas more naturally.

Exemplo: Yes, I often ate snacks as a child because my siblings frequently bought chocolates and potato chips. We would watch television together and enjoy the snacks, which made those moments special.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be enhanced by combining sentences using linking words and adding more specific details or examples.

Exemplo: I like potato chips because of their crispy texture and the variety of flavours available, such as barbecue and sour cream, which keep the snack interesting.

× I usually eat snacks when I am watching movie.

✓ I usually eat snacks when I am watching a movie.

The noun 'movie' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× Popcorn is my favorite snacks when I am binge watching Korean drama.

✓ Popcorn is my favorite snack when I am binge watching Korean drama.

The word 'popcorn' is an uncountable noun and should be treated as singular. Therefore, 'snacks' should be singular 'snack' to agree with 'popcorn'.

× I think popcorns is nutritious and more healthy compared to other junk food.

✓ I think popcorn is nutritious and healthier compared to other junk food.

'Popcorn' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'popcorns'. Also, 'more healthy' is better expressed as 'healthier' for correct comparative form.

× Some people eat fruits as their snack, while the other people choose junk food like potato chips, chocolates, or candies.

✓ Some people eat fruit as their snack, while other people choose junk food like potato chips, chocolate, or candy.

'Fruit' is generally uncountable when referring to it as food, so 'fruits' should be 'fruit'. Also, 'the other people' should be 'other people' without 'the'. Additionally, 'chocolates' and 'candies' are better as uncountable nouns 'chocolate' and 'candy' in this context.

× So it depends on the amount and the types of snack we eat.

✓ So it depends on the amount and the types of snacks we eat.

The word 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' to agree with 'types', which is plural.

× Potato chips are my favorite snacks because I like the crispy texture of the chips.

✓ Potato chips are my favorite snack because I like the crispy texture of the chips.

When referring to a type of food in general, 'snack' should be singular to match 'favorite'. 'Potato chips' is plural, but 'favorite snack' is singular.