Snacks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid unclear phrases like "exits next" and "on our Diliberti." Also, try to use correct vocabulary such as "health conscious" instead of "health conscience." Keep your sentences concise and directly answer the question.

Exemplo: I usually eat snacks occasionally because I am very health conscious. I try to avoid eating snacks every day since I believe it is unhealthy.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains several errors. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Clearly state your opinion and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: I am very health conscious, so I don't think eating snacks like chips is healthy. Instead, I prefer to eat fruits and nuts during the day because they are nutritious.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammar mistakes. Use past tense consistently and avoid fragmented sentences. Provide specific examples and link your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was a kid. I especially liked chips and other junk food because I enjoyed their taste.

Sugestão: Your answer is fragmented and repetitive. Avoid repeating words and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear and concise response with specific examples.

Exemplo: I like crunchy and crispy almonds as snacks. I also enjoy banana chips because they are tasty and healthy.

× I am very health conscience.

✓ I am very health conscious.

The word 'conscience' is a noun meaning awareness of right and wrong, but the correct adjective to describe being careful about health is 'conscious'. Using 'health conscious' correctly describes someone who pays attention to their health.

× I don't prefer to exits next on daily basis.

✓ I don't prefer to eat snacks on a daily basis.

The phrase 'exits next' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The intended phrase is 'eat snacks'. Also, 'on daily basis' requires the article 'a' to be grammatically correct: 'on a daily basis'.

× I think it's very bad if you're eating snacks on our Diliberti.

✓ I think it's very bad if you're eating snacks on our diet.

The word 'Diliberti' is incorrect and seems to be a mispronunciation or typo for 'diet'. Using the correct word 'diet' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× I'm very health conscience.

✓ I'm very health conscious.

Same as before, 'conscience' is a noun, but the adjective 'conscious' is needed here to describe being aware of health.

× I don't think like Giddings, Next is a healthy option.

✓ I don't think eating snacks is a healthy option.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Giddings, Next' seems to be a mishearing or typo. The corrected sentence clearly expresses the intended meaning using proper sentence structure.

× I will instead of that and I will prefer to eat fruits and nuts during my daytime.

✓ Instead of that, I prefer to eat fruits and nuts during the day.

The phrase 'I will instead of that' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'Instead of that'. Also, 'during my daytime' is better expressed as 'during the day'.

× I always prefer to eat snacks.

✓ I always preferred to eat snacks.

Since the question is about past habits ('Did you often eat snacks when you were young?'), the verb should be in the past tense 'preferred' to match the time frame.

× I love cookery, I love chips and I always eat. Junk food.

✓ I love cooking, I love chips, and I always eat junk food.

'Cookery' is a noun referring to the art of cooking, but 'cooking' is more natural here. Also, the sentence was fragmented; combining into one sentence with proper commas improves clarity.

× I like like crunchy and crispy almonds now and.

✓ I like crunchy and crispy almonds now.

The repeated word 'like' is a mistake and should be removed. The sentence is otherwise correct.

× I know, I know. I like the banana chips.

✓ I know, I know. I like banana chips.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'banana chips' when speaking generally. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural.