Snacks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'I eat snacks', combine your ideas into one clear sentence.

Exemplo: I usually eat snacks in the evening while watching a movie because it helps me relax and unwind after a long day.

Sugestão: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Avoid unclear phrases like 'that's next are healthy'. Also, provide specific reasons and use linking words to explain your opinion clearly.

Exemplo: As far as I'm concerned, eating snacks regularly is unhealthy because they usually contain a lot of sugar and palm oil, which have little nutritional value.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and correcting sentence structure. Avoid incomplete sentences and be specific about your experiences.

Exemplo: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because every evening I played with my friends, and we would buy crackers or chips to enjoy together while chatting and playing.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to explain your change in preference clearly and provide specific reasons for your choices.

Exemplo: I usually like eating chips and cookies, but recently my preference has changed to sweet snacks because they calm my mind and make me feel refreshed.

× I usually prefer to eat snacks during evening time because it really helps me to watch movie along with it.

✓ I usually prefer to eat snacks during the evening because it really helps me watch movies along with it.

The phrase 'watch movie' is incorrect because 'watch' should be followed by the plural noun 'movies' or an article before 'movie'. Also, 'during evening time' is better expressed as 'during the evening'. The verb 'helps me to watch' can be simplified to 'helps me watch' as 'help' is often followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'.

× I eat snacks so that I feel relaxed and it also unwind my day.

✓ I eat snacks so that I feel relaxed and it also unwinds my day.

The verb 'unwind' should be in the third person singular present tense 'unwinds' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× Well, as far as I'm concerned, I don't think that's next are healthy on regular basis because they have no nutritional value and that is only palm oil or sugar involved in this next.

✓ Well, as far as I'm concerned, I don't think snacks are healthy on a regular basis because they have no nutritional value and only palm oil or sugar is involved in these snacks.

The word 'next' is incorrect and should be 'snacks'. Also, 'that is only palm oil or sugar involved in this next' is incorrect; it should be 'only palm oil or sugar is involved in these snacks'. The pronouns and nouns must agree in number and be correctly used.

× Did you often eat snacks when you were young?

✓ Did you often eat snacks when you were young?

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.

× Well, yes, I frequently used to have snacks when I was young because at that time I. Every evening I used to play with my friends, so we played an bought some crackers or chips and enjoyed altogether. By chatting and playing.

✓ Well, yes, I frequently used to have snacks when I was young because at that time, every evening I used to play with my friends, so we played and bought some crackers or chips and enjoyed together by chatting and playing.

The sentence had a fragment 'because at that time I.' which is incomplete and was corrected by removing the fragment and connecting the ideas properly. Also, 'played an bought' is corrected to 'played and bought'. 'Enjoyed altogether' is better expressed as 'enjoyed together'. These corrections improve sentence structure and clarity.

× I love to eat chips as well as cookies as snacks. Recently mightiest has been changed. I like to I love to eat. Sweet things more because it really calms my mind as well as I feel refreshed when I have that thing.

✓ I love to eat chips as well as cookies as snacks. Recently, my taste has changed. I like to eat sweet things more because they really calm my mind and I feel refreshed when I have them.

The phrase 'mightiest has been changed' is incorrect and should be 'my taste has changed'. The sentence 'I like to I love to eat.' is redundant and corrected to 'I like to eat'. 'Sweet things' is plural, so the pronouns referring to it should be plural as well ('they', 'them'). Also, 'that thing' is vague and replaced with 'them' to refer to sweet things. These corrections fix pronoun usage and sentence clarity.