Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Говорите более сжато и организованно: начните с простого предложения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных детали. Избегайте повторов («tropical» и «hot and rainy» повторяются), исправьте небольшие грамматические ошибки (например, «it's the wet season now»).

Exemplo: I live on a tropical island, so the weather is usually hot and humid. At the moment it's the wet season, so we have frequent heavy showers almost every day.

Sugestão: Сформулируйте основную мысль чётко, затем добавьте одну-две конкретные причины. Устраните повторы и неверные формы (например, «one of the reasons», «northern country», «windy winters»).

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I grew up in a northern country where winters were long and very windy. Those chilly conditions feel familiar to me, which is why I miss cold climates despite living in the tropics.

Sugestão: Дайте развёрнутый, но краткий ответ: тема + 1–2 поддерживающие детали. Избегайте слов-паразитов и грамматических ошибок («I have no complaints about strong rain», «it's my favourite season»).

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy the sound and smell of rain. I find heavy showers relaxing, and they make the landscape look fresh and vibrant.

Sugestão: Отвечайте прямо, затем поясните частоту и причину. Уберите тавтологии («today, now today»), используйте точные фразы («four times a day») и грамматически правильные конструкции.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually check the forecast regularly. Lately I check it four times a day because my son is studying weather at school and we keep a weather diary together.

Sugestão: Структурируйте ответ: начальное утверждение + 2 конкретных эффекта с кратким пояснением. Избегайте пауз и грамматических ошибок («There are huge effects», «it is connected to glacier melting»).

Exemplo: Climate change has caused more extreme weather and rising sea levels. For example, melting glaciers contribute to higher sea levels, and many regions now experience stronger storms and unusual temperature swings.

Sugestão: Отвечайте уверенно: краткая основная мысль + одна или две причины/примера. Уберите неуверенные фразы («I guess», «or something like this») и паузы, используйте более естественную лексику («contrasting climate»).

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates because it would be fascinating to experience snow or a temperate autumn after living in the tropics. For instance, I would like to see mountains covered in snow and try winter sports.

× I live on a tropical island so I have tropical weather hot and now it is hot and rainy weather almost all the time because it's wet season now.

✓ I live on a tropical island, so the weather is tropical: hot and rainy almost all the time because it is the wet season now.

The sentence contains awkward phrasing and passive-like constructions; reorganizing into active descriptive clauses clarifies meaning. Use 'the weather is tropical' rather than 'I have tropical weather', and place adjectives in correct order. Use 'the wet season' with the definite article. Also add commas to separate clauses. (Explanation in English as requested.)

× Maybe it's because I was born in a North Country.

✓ Maybe it's because I was born in a northern country.

Use adjective form 'northern' rather than capitalized 'North' plus 'Country'. 'Country' should be lowercase unless a proper noun. 'Northern country' correctly modifies 'country'.

× It was cold almost all the time and the wind winter was so, so strong and I was freezing all the time.

✓ It was cold almost all the time, the winter winds were very strong, and I was freezing constantly.

'Wind winter' is incorrect word order; use 'winter winds' and plural verb agreement 'were'. Replace 'so, so strong' with 'very strong' and 'all the time' with 'constantly' for variety. Maintain past tense consistency.

× But actually, maybe it's one of the reason why I moved to the tropical country.

✓ But actually, maybe it's one of the reasons I moved to a tropical country.

Use plural 'reasons' after 'one of'. 'Why' is unnecessary after 'reason'. Use 'a tropical country' unless referring to a specific named country.

× I prefer wet weather because I like rain. It's my favorite season and uh, I have no any complaints about. Strong rains and about this weather.

✓ I prefer wet weather because I like rain. It's my favorite season, and I have no complaints about the heavy rain and this kind of weather.

Remove 'any' after 'no' ('no any' is incorrect). Combine fragments into one sentence and use 'heavy rain' or 'strong rain' and 'this kind of weather' for clarity. Fix punctuation and sentence fragments.

× Today, now today I have an interesting period in my life because my son at school is studying weather forecast.

✓ At the moment I am in an interesting period in my life because my son at school is studying the weather forecast.

Avoid repetition 'Today, now today'. Use 'At the moment' or 'These days'. Add definite article 'the' before 'weather forecast'. Maintain present continuous 'is studying'. Ensure natural word order.

× That's why we are making a diary about the weather and checking the weather every time, four times a day.

✓ That's why we are keeping a weather diary and checking the weather four times a day.

'Every time, four times a day' is awkward. Use 'four times a day' at end of clause. 'Keeping a diary' is more natural than 'making a diary'. Remove redundancy.

× I was surprised that it's so interesting and I like it.

✓ I was surprised to find it so interesting, and I enjoy it.

Mixing past 'was surprised' with 'it's' is inconsistent; use infinitive 'to find' to link past reaction to present quality. 'I like it' can be more natural as 'I enjoy it.'

× There is a huge uh, effects of climate change, uh, we can feel, uh, today almost in every part of our world.

✓ There are huge effects of climate change that we can feel today in almost every part of the world.

Use plural verb 'are' to agree with plural noun 'effects'. Remove filler 'uh' and restructure sentence: 'There are huge effects... that we can feel today in almost every part of the world.'

× It's it, uh, connect with the glaciers melting.

✓ It is connected with the melting of glaciers.

Use passive 'is connected' or active 'connects', and use the gerund phrase 'melting of glaciers' or 'glaciers melting' with correct word order. Avoid filler words.

× That's why the weather changed almost everywhere, uh, and can be.

✓ That's why the weather has changed almost everywhere and can be unpredictable.

'And can be' is incomplete. Complete the idea: 'can be unpredictable' or similar. Use present perfect 'has changed' to describe recent changes with present relevance.

× If I had the opportunity, I would love to do it because it's very interesting and amazing, I guess, to see some places which are, uh, in a contrast with your, uh, usual weather conditions or something like this.

✓ If I had the opportunity, I would love to do it because it would be very interesting to see places that contrast with my usual weather conditions.

Tighten phrasing: 'in a contrast with your usual' is awkward; use 'contrast with my usual'. Remove fillers 'uh' and vague 'or something like this'. Use conditional/modal consistency: 'If I had... I would...' and 'it would be very interesting.'