Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence about current weather, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and avoid redundancy (e.g., "in this time" repeated). Aim for 2–4 sentences, with linking words like "and" or "so" only when helpful.

Exemplo: At the moment it's spring in the UK, which runs from March to June. The weather is mild and many flowers are in bloom, so parks are very colorful and migratory birds are returning.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence stating preference, then provide two concise, specific reasons. Avoid repetition and informal phrases like "short sleeve shorts" and "we don't want to frighten about cold." Use linking words such as "because" and "so" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because it's more comfortable for outdoor activities. For example, I can wear lighter clothes and meet friends outside more often without worrying about getting cold.

Sugestão: This answer is generally clear—make it slightly more natural by fixing minor grammar (e.g., "unless" is incorrect here) and tightening expression. Use linking words like "because" and "so" as you did, and give one concrete example of an activity affected by rain.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because damp clothes and muddy streets make me uncomfortable. For example, on sunny days I enjoy walking in the park or meeting friends at outdoor cafés.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and be concise: say how often and why, then mention the method. Remove unclear phrases like "or we record." Keep it to two sentences and use linking words such as "because" and "so."

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather every morning before I leave for work because I need to know whether to take an umbrella. I usually use a weather app on my phone so I can dress and pack accordingly.

Sugestão: Good content and specific points. Improve accuracy and natural phrasing: use plural/singular correctly ("temperatures"), correct collocations ("threatened ecosystems"), and connect causes and effects with words like "as a result" or "leading to." Keep it to 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: In recent decades climate change has caused rising temperatures and shifts in rainfall patterns, leading to more frequent droughts and extreme weather. As a result, habitats are being lost and many species are threatened, partly because of pollution and deforestation driven by human activity.

Sugestão: Start with a direct topic sentence and correct small errors ("windows" -> "winters", avoid repeating "different"). Give one specific reason and one example of an activity. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "for example."

Exemplo: Yes. Because UK winters are usually mild with little snow, I would like to visit Canada to experience heavy snowfall and try winter sports such as skiing. The snowy landscapes would be a wonderful contrast to what I'm used to.

× Currently I live in UK.

✓ Currently I live in the UK.

The country name 'UK' requires the definite article 'the' because it is an abbreviation for 'United Kingdom', a compound noun that uses 'the'. Use 'the UK' for correct usage.

× Here is spring, it starts from March and it ends on June.

✓ It is spring here; it starts in March and ends in June.

Use 'it is spring' rather than 'Here is spring' for natural English. Use the preposition 'in' for months (not 'from' with single months) and 'ends in June' is standard. Also combine clauses for fluency.

× It is very lovely time.

✓ It is a very lovely time.

A singular countable noun 'time' needs an article. Use 'a' to indicate 'a lovely time'.

× In this time most of flowers were blooming and I think most of the birds from other countries are coming this time and it is very pleasant time of the year.

✓ At this time most of the flowers are blooming, and I think many birds from other countries come at this time; it is a very pleasant time of year.

Use present continuous or present simple for habitual or current seasonal events: 'are blooming' and 'come' (or 'are coming') are appropriate. Add the article 'the' before 'flowers' and use 'many' rather than 'most' for birds if unsure. Use 'a very pleasant time of year' (no 'the') for natural phrasing. Also use 'at this time' instead of 'in this time'.

× I prefer hot weather because comparing to winter we can wear whatever we like, especially we can wear short sleeve shorts etcetera.

✓ I prefer hot weather because, compared to winter, we can wear whatever we like; for example, short-sleeved shirts and shorts.

Use 'compared to' or 'compared with' rather than 'comparing to'. 'Short sleeve shorts' is incorrect and repetitive; use 'short-sleeved shirts and shorts'. Provide example punctuation for clarity.

× Also we can go anywhere. We can go anywhere.

✓ Also, we can go anywhere.

The sentence was repeated; remove duplication. Add a comma after 'Also' for clarity.

× We don't want to frighten about cold or fever and we can get together with more people in this time.

✓ We do not have to worry about the cold or fever, and we can get together with more people at this time.

'Frighten about' is incorrect; use 'worry about' or 'be afraid of'. Use 'the cold' and 'fever' with 'the' for specific conditions. Use 'at this time' rather than 'in this time'.

× Yes, I checked the weather every morning before I leave home because I commute to work and need to know whether to take an umbrella or or we record.

✓ Yes, I check the weather every morning before I leave home because I commute to work and need to know whether to take an umbrella or not.

Use present simple 'check' for habitual actions, not past 'checked'. Remove the garbled phrase 'or we record' and add 'or not' to complete the choice.

× I usually use a weather app or my phone to see if it will rain or be sunny so I can pack accordingly.

✓ I usually use a weather app on my phone to see if it will rain or be sunny, so I can pack accordingly.

Use 'on my phone' to indicate the app's platform. Add a comma before the result clause for readability.

× Over the last few decades, climate change has had serious effects.

✓ Over the last few decades, climate change has had serious effects.

This sentence is correct as written; present perfect 'has had' is appropriate for impacts continuing to the present.

× Rising temperature and reduced rainfall have led to more frequent droughts.

✓ Rising temperatures and reduced rainfall have led to more frequent droughts.

Use plural 'temperatures' when speaking generally about rising temperature patterns. The rest of the sentence is correct.

× Human activities like pollution and deforestation have further dangered ecosystem and ecosystem habitat loss for many species.

✓ Human activities like pollution and deforestation have further endangered ecosystems and caused habitat loss for many species.

Use the correct past participle 'endangered' (not 'dangered'). Use plural 'ecosystems' and rephrase to 'caused habitat loss' for clarity.

× Yes I would, I live in UK where windows are usually mild and we won't get much snow.

✓ Yes, I would. I live in the UK where winters are usually mild and we do not get much snow.

Add commas and periods to separate sentences. Use 'the UK' and correct 'windows' to 'winters'. Use 'do not' instead of contraction for consistency; 'we do not get much snow' is natural.

× So I would like to visit Canada to experience heavy snowfall and enjoy winter sports like skiing.

✓ So I would like to visit Canada to experience heavy snowfall and enjoy winter sports like skiing.

This sentence is correct; the use of 'would like' to express a desire is appropriate.

× The snowy landscapes there would be a really beautiful and different different what I am used to.

✓ The snowy landscapes there would be really beautiful and very different from what I am used to.

Remove the duplicated word 'different' and use 'different from' to compare. Use 'very' to modify 'different' and reorder for natural English.