Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and awkward phrasing, and give one or two specific details. Use linking words only if adding extra information.

Exemplo: I live in a place with extreme seasons: very cold winters and very hot summers. At the moment we are in a heatwave, with daytime temperatures often above 35°C.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give one specific reason. Avoid repeating the same idea and unnecessary comparisons unless they add information.

Exemplo: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy cozy evenings under a blanket and activities like hiking in crisp air. I find cold weather more relaxing than hot, humid conditions.

Sugestão: Make your response clearer and more natural. State your preference, give one clear reason and a concrete example. Avoid awkward phrases and irrelevant details.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because heavy rain often disrupts my plans and makes commuting difficult. For example, when it rains I usually cancel outdoor walks, but on dry days I can go out and relax with a snack.

Sugestão: Give a clear frequency and purpose. Use correct grammar and avoid repeating. Mention how you check (app, TV) and when (morning, before going out).

Exemplo: Yes, I check the forecast every morning on my phone before leaving for work to see if there will be rain or extreme heat over the next few days.

Sugestão: Provide a focused answer with specific effects and an example. Avoid vague language and repetition. Use linking words to list effects if needed.

Exemplo: Climate change has caused more frequent heatwaves, intense storms, and shifting rainfall patterns. For example, in recent years our region has experienced longer droughts followed by sudden heavy rains that damage crops.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give specific reasons and details about the places. Correct repetition and unclear phrases; use one or two descriptive sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I'd love to visit northern cities with cooler climates, such as Sabath and Narang. I’m attracted by their scenic valleys, pine forests and fresh air, which are a nice contrast to our hot summers.

× I live in an area where temperature is so severe and we have very cold winters and very warm summers, so the weather patterns here are very rigid and very currently we are having a very hot summer.

✓ I live in an area where the temperature is severe; we have very cold winters and very warm summers, so the weather patterns here are very rigid, and currently we are having a very hot summer.

Missing definite article before 'temperature' and awkward word order. Use 'the temperature' for a specific local condition. 'Very currently' is incorrect — place 'currently' before the clause or after a comma. Also add punctuation to separate ideas for clarity.

× I prefer cold weather because I like cozy nights and warm blankets.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I like cozy nights and warm blankets.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present simple tense and fits the context; no change needed.

× Many people like hot weather and they want to enjoy somewhere, but I like winters or cold weather the most.

✓ Many people like hot weather and want to enjoy being somewhere warm, but I prefer winter or cold weather the most.

Awkward phrase 'want to enjoy somewhere'. Use 'enjoy being somewhere warm' or similar. 'I like winters' is acceptable but 'I prefer winter' is more natural. Adjust parallel structure.

× I prefer a dry weather because during rains it it's difficult to go outside or it may stop your work.

✓ I prefer dry weather because during the rains it's difficult to go outside and it may stop your work.

Do not use 'a' before uncountable 'weather' — use no article. Use 'the rains' or 'rain' to refer to rainy periods. Remove duplicate 'it' and use 'and' for connecting causes. Maintain contractions appropriately.

× And in dry weather I enjoy different snacks and my blanket.

✓ In dry weather I enjoy various snacks and using my blanket.

Beginning with 'And' is informal; remove it. 'Different snacks' is awkward — use 'various snacks'. 'My blanket' needs a verb to show action: 'using my blanket' or 'snuggling under my blanket'.

× Yeah, I always check weather forecast and you always check for some rain because the weather here is so hot and we are having a very warm summer.

✓ Yeah, I always check the weather forecast and check for rain because the weather here is so hot and we are having a very warm summer.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'weather forecast'. 'You always check' is inconsistent with speaker; use 'I' throughout. 'Some rain' is unnatural here; use 'rain'.

× So I always check weather forecast to see do we have rains in the coming days.

✓ So I always check the weather forecast to see if we will have rain in the coming days.

Add 'the' before 'weather forecast'. Use 'to see if' for indirect questions rather than 'to see do we'. Use 'will have' for future expectation or 'are going to have', and use uncountable 'rain' not 'rains'.

× Climate change is a very serious concern these days and from the past few years we can see a very destructive role of climate change in in the in the natural environment.

✓ Climate change is a very serious concern these days, and over the past few years we have seen the destructive impact of climate change on the natural environment.

Use 'over the past few years' and present perfect 'have seen' to describe recent trends. 'Role' is awkward; use 'impact'. Remove repeated 'in the'. Use 'on the natural environment' for correct preposition.

× Yeah, I like to visit cities in the north because of cold weather.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit cities in the north because of the cold weather.

'Yeah' is informal; 'Yes' or 'I would like' is more appropriate for polite speech. Add definite article 'the' before 'cold weather' when referring to a specific type.

× As as as I told you that I like cold weather.

✓ As I told you, I like cold weather.

Remove repeated 'as' and unnecessary conjunction 'that'. Use a comma after the introductory phrase.

× I want to go to cold cities like Sabbath, like Narang.

✓ I want to go to cold cities like Sabbath and Narang.

Avoid repeating 'like' before each example; connect examples with 'and'. This improves sentence flow.

× These valleys are so beautiful.

✓ These valleys are very beautiful.

'So beautiful' is informal but acceptable; 'very beautiful' is slightly more formal. Both are grammatically correct; change only if formal tone is desired.

× The environment is very beautiful and gold.

✓ The environment is very beautiful and golden.

'Gold' is a noun or color name; use adjective 'golden' to describe appearance. Alternatively, specify what is golden (e.g., 'golden sunlight').