Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to provide a more detailed and natural response by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and giving specific information about the climate. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'hot' unnecessarily.

Exemplo: The weather where I live is generally hot and humid throughout the year because it's located in the ASEAN region, which has a tropical climate.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding reasons or examples to support your preference, and by using more varied vocabulary.

Exemplo: I actually prefer cold weather because I find it refreshing and more comfortable than the heat, especially when I can wear warm clothes and enjoy winter activities.

Sugestão: Good use of personal feelings, but try to expand your answer with more specific reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy the sound and smell of rain, which makes the air feel fresh and clean, and it helps me relax after a long day.

Sugestão: Try to organise your answer more clearly, avoid repetition, and use correct grammar. Also, provide a structured response with linking words to explain when and why you check the forecast.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going on long trips or when I travel far from my city, so I can prepare accordingly and avoid any unexpected weather conditions.

Sugestão: Even if you are not sure, try to give a simple opinion or mention something you know about climate change to show your ability to discuss the topic.

Exemplo: Although I don't know much, I think climate change has caused more extreme weather events like floods and heatwaves in recent years.

Sugestão: Improve your grammar and vocabulary by using correct plural forms and clearer expressions. Also, explain why you want to visit such places with specific reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates from mine because experiencing new weather conditions can be exciting and broaden my understanding of different cultures.

× Uh, the weather is hot because I live in the ASEAN.

✓ Uh, the weather is hot because I live in ASEAN.

The definite article 'the' is not used before 'ASEAN' because it is a proper noun referring to a specific organization or region. Using 'the' here is incorrect; simply saying 'in ASEAN' is appropriate.

× When I go to outside like a long trip, I always check about the weather, especially if I if I go too far away from my city as well.

✓ When I go outside on a long trip, I always check the weather, especially if I go far away from my city as well.

The phrase 'go to outside' is incorrect; 'go outside' is the correct form. Also, 'like a long trip' should be 'on a long trip' to indicate the occasion. The phrase 'check about the weather' is incorrect; it should be 'check the weather'. The repeated 'if I' is a redundancy and should be removed.

× If I traveling I check.

✓ If I am traveling, I check.

The verb 'traveling' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Without 'am', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× I don't have more information about this.

✓ I don't have much information about this.

'More' is used for comparisons or additions, but here the speaker means a lack of sufficient information, so 'much' is the correct quantifier for uncountable nouns like 'information'.

× Yes, I'd like to visit another cities or different climes from my life because I think it's make difference.

✓ Yes, I'd like to visit other cities or different climates from my life because I think it makes a difference.

'Another' is used with singular nouns, so with plural 'cities', 'other' is correct. 'Climes' is an uncommon plural; 'climates' is more appropriate. 'It's make difference' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes a difference' to agree with the singular subject and correct verb form.