Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语句较长且有重复，建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时注意语法准确性。可以更自然地描述天气变化，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Exemplo: I live in southeast China, which used to have moderate temperatures and high humidity. However, recently the weather has changed, and intense heat waves often strike the area.

Sugestão: 回答中有口语化表达和重复，建议使用更正式和简洁的语言，避免使用“you know”等口语词汇，同时注意语法和句子结构。

Exemplo: If I have to choose, I prefer hot weather because I am used to the occasional heat waves in my area, and I find it easier to tolerate heat than cold.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议简化句子结构，避免口语化表达，使用准确的词汇描述感受，并注意逻辑连贯。

Exemplo: I dislike wet weather because high humidity makes people feel uncomfortable and can cause breathing difficulties. In contrast, dry weather feels clearer and more comfortable to me.

Sugestão: 回答较完整，但有语法错误和表达不够自然，建议注意时态和固定搭配，简化句子使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, checking the weather forecast is part of my daily routine. I usually check it twice a day, in the morning and at night, to plan my activities and stay updated on any changes.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，建议注意主谓一致和名词复数形式，使用更准确的词汇表达观点，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: I believe the effects of climate change have become increasingly severe in recent years. Extreme weather events, such as heat waves, heavy rainfall, and floods, have occurred in many regions, threatening society as a whole.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简化句子，避免重复表达，使用更准确的词汇和句式，使表达更自然流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates because I am interested in meteorology. It would give me a chance to learn more and help me find a suitable place to live in the future.

× there are often really intense heat wave striking this area.

✓ there are often really intense heat waves striking this area.

heat wave 是可数名词，表示热浪，复数形式应为 heat waves。这里主语是复数，谓语也应对应复数形式。

× the area where I live is full of heat waves and a high temperature occasionally.

✓ the area where I live is full of heat waves and high temperatures occasionally.

temperature 在这里表示气温，应使用复数形式 temperatures，因为是泛指多次出现的高温。

× I guess I will just tolerate the hot weather better than cold ones 'cause I'm more accustomed to it.

✓ I guess I will just tolerate the hot weather better than cold weather 'cause I'm more accustomed to it.

cold ones 指代冷的天气时，ones 用法不当，cold weather 更合适，保持与 hot weather 一致。

× weather this was really high dew point can give a really unpleasant feeling on people's looks and we may feel the difficulty of breathing.

✓ weather with a really high dew point can give a really unpleasant feeling on people's skin and we may feel difficulty breathing.

介词 with 用于表示天气具有高露点，原句中使用 was 不合适。people's looks 应为 people's skin 更准确，difficulty of breathing 改为 difficulty breathing 更自然。

× I think I have already make checking the weather forecast apart of my daily routine.

✓ I think I have already made checking the weather forecast a part of my daily routine.

动词 make 的过去分词是 made，且短语应为 make something a part of，原句 apart 用法错误。

× I think I have already make checking the weather forecast apart of my daily routine.

✓ I think I have already made checking the weather forecast a part of my daily routine.

这里使用现在完成时，动词 make 应使用过去分词 made。

× I at least check the weather forecast twice a day, in the morning and in the night.

✓ I at least check the weather forecast twice a day, in the morning and at night.

表示时间段时，通常用 at night 而不是 in the night。

× In the night I will check the temperature for tomorrow in order to schedule activity for myself and in the morning I will check again in case there is some change.

✓ At night I will check the temperature for tomorrow in order to schedule activities for myself and in the morning I will check again in case there is some change.

同上，使用 at night 更合适；activity 应为复数 activities，因为通常指多项活动。

× I think the effects of climate change has emerged as more and more intense in recent years.

✓ I think the effects of climate change have emerged as more and more intense in recent years.

主语 effects 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数 have 而非单数 has。

× There are many extreme weathers striking in many regions, for example the heat wave, heavy rainfall or floods, which can jeopardize the whole society.

✓ There are many extreme weather events striking in many regions, for example heat waves, heavy rainfall or floods, which can jeopardize the whole society.

weather 是不可数名词，不能直接复数，改为 weather events 更准确；heat wave 应复数 heat waves。

× visiting a place with some distinct climate conditions and give me a nice chance to study more.

✓ visiting a place with some distinct climate conditions gives me a nice chance to study more.

主语是 visiting，谓语应为单数形式 gives，且原句缺少谓语动词。